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【正文】 ______________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于情景式命題，要求寫一封申請信。根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：簡單介紹自己的情況，表明寫信目的：申請助學(xué)貸款。說明申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額。保證合理利用貸款并表明還款決心，最后表示感謝。 高分范文 A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan Sep 12th, 2008 To whom it may concern, I am a freshman of Lianhe University, [1]majoring in Applied Physics. I am writing in the hope that I may obtain a bank loan to support my study in Applied Physics for the following four years. My parents are both laidoff workers, so it’s [2]beyond their power to finance me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. [6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely yours, Song Xue 【亮點點評】 [1]“主修…”，現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。 [2]“超出…的能力范圍”。 [3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。 [4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 [5]“with+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”的獨立結(jié)構(gòu)。 [6]“我保證…”，that引導(dǎo)同位語從句。 [7]“不遺余力”。 佳句臨摩 ?。篢o make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. 臨摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飛機(jī)都從大海上離奇消失了。 ___________________________________________________________________________. ?。篢herefore, the college tuition being a much heavier burden on my family, I am pelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan. 臨摩：由于周圍交通不便利，人們只得步行回家。 ___________________________________________________________________________. ：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. 臨摩：全國人民都不遺余力地支持北京舉辦奧運會。 5
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