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al, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole Practice 2 Do you think the following passage is a good one? Why or why not? Zhao Gang got some fireworks and was going to set them off on the New Year’s Eve. This happened to be seen by his classmate,Wu Li. She told him that it was not allowed to set off fireworks in Beijing. But Zhao Gang thought it was the Spring Festival and he could enjoy himself for a while. So Wu Li showed him some picture posters and explained that setting off fireworks might cause pollution and big fires. The worse to happen was that it would do serious harm to people’s eyes. Having heard this,Zhao Gang agreed with Wu Li. He threw his fireworks away. Zhao Gang got some fireworks and was going to set them off on the New Year’s Eve. This happened to be seen by his classmate,Wu Li. She told him that it was not allowed to set off fireworks in Beijing. But Zhao Gang thought it was the Spring Festival and he could enjoy himself for a while. So Wu Li showed him some picture posters and explained that setting off fireworks might cause pollution and big fires. The worse to happen was that it would do serious harm to people’s eyes. Having heard this,Zhao Gang agreed with Wu Li. He threw his fireworks away. 一、要點齊全 1. 趙剛正要在 除夕之夜 放鞭炮 2. 吳莉看見了并上前阻止 3. 吳莉給趙剛看宣傳畫 4. 放鞭炮的三個危害( 引發(fā)火災、造成污染、 炸傷身體 ) 5. 趙剛同意不再放鞭炮了 二、注意點: :記敘文 :第三人稱(趙剛 吳莉) 3. 時態(tài):過去時 4. 有效使用連接詞使內(nèi)容連貫、完整 同學