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_____________________________________________ 范文借鑒 Campus violence (校園暴力 ) happens from time to time is harmful for hurts not only our bodies but also our a student, ? it is important to know how to be a good teenager.? First, we should follow the school rules to behave well at school.? It’s good for us to obey the teachers and ? must be strict with ourselves.? Second, we ? should keep away from Inter bars, and go to school and go back home on time.? Third, as teenagers, we should be friendly to one another, and don’t fight with classmates.? Finally, if we have any difficulties in life, ? it’s best to talk about them with our teacher and a word, we should try our best to behave well. 借鑒點 ? 文章內(nèi)容完整,要點齊全。首先開門見山引出話題;然后分別從四方面介紹規(guī)范自我行為,做個合格中學生的內(nèi)容;最后總結(jié)全文,發(fā)出倡議。 ? 順序副詞如 first, second, third, finally等正確恰當?shù)剡\用,使文章條理清晰,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 ? 句式 It’ s+ adj./n.+ to do should,must等的運用,使文章行文流暢,語氣親切委婉且不失嚴肅,有極強的規(guī)勸效果和說服力。