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_____________________________________________ 范文借鑒 Campus violence (校園暴力 ) happens from time to time is harmful for hurts not only our bodies but also our a student, ? it is important to know how to be a good teenager.? First, we should follow the school rules to behave well at school.? It’s good for us to obey the teachers and ? must be strict with ourselves.? Second, we ? should keep away from Inter bars, and go to school and go back home on time.? Third, as teenagers, we should be friendly to one another, and don’t fight with classmates.? Finally, if we have any difficulties in life, ? it’s best to talk about them with our teacher and a word, we should try our best to behave well. 借鑒點(diǎn) ? 文章內(nèi)容完整,要點(diǎn)齊全。首先開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山引出話(huà)題;然后分別從四方面介紹規(guī)范自我行為,做個(gè)合格中學(xué)生的內(nèi)容;最后總結(jié)全文,發(fā)出倡議。 ? 順序副詞如 first, second, third, finally等正確恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用,使文章條理清晰,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 ? 句式 It’ s+ adj./n.+ to do should,must等的運(yùn)用,使文章行文流暢,語(yǔ)氣親切委婉且不失嚴(yán)肅,有極強(qiáng)的規(guī)勸效果和說(shuō)服力。