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面,以 “ Three Years’ School Life” 為題寫一篇小短文,回顧你的初中校園生活。 [寫作要求 ] 1.詞數(shù) 70~ 80; 2.條理清晰,語句連貫,句式規(guī)范,字跡工整; 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。 【 審題指導(dǎo) 】 本篇書面表達(dá)的寫作內(nèi)容是回顧三年的初中校園生活。寫作時,使用第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。要盡量做到結(jié)構(gòu)合理,意思清楚,行文流暢,書寫規(guī)范。 【擬定提綱】 【我的作品】 Three Years’ School Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 范文借鑒 Three Years’ School Life I’ m a student in Grade will leave my junior middle school next month after I finish the ’ m feeling a bit nervous and excited. I study in a middle is big and are many students and teachers in get on well with my often help each study many subjects in like English and P. often do sports in the afternoon after course, we all spend_much_time_on_study. We work very teachers are quite friendly to are also can ask_them_for_help at any go on a school trip each term and we really enjoy it. In a few days, I have to say “ goodbye” to my feel sorry about love my school and all my will never fet my three years’ school life. 借鑒點(diǎn) ? 文章涵蓋了所有的提示要點(diǎn),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 ? 有效地運(yùn)用了語句間的連接成分,語言流暢,過渡自然,內(nèi)容連貫。 ? 時態(tài)、語態(tài)及人稱運(yùn)用正確。回憶過去的事情用一般過去時,敘述現(xiàn)在的感受用一般現(xiàn)在時。 ? 運(yùn)用了大量詞組,如: get on well with, do sports,spend...on..., ask...for...等,體現(xiàn)了作者較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力;長短句交替使用,使文章讀起來朗朗上口。