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his 。 典例運(yùn)用 【例】 在忙碌的學(xué)習(xí)之余,周末生活是同學(xué)們盼望已久的。我們所度過的周末,有些是愉快的,有些是難忘的,有些是令人煩惱的。你是怎樣度過周末的?你的周末生活有趣嗎?請(qǐng)你以 “ A Pleasant Weekend” 為題,寫一篇小短文來敘述你的周末生活。 [寫作要求 ] 1.詞數(shù)不少于 80;語言流暢、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔; 2.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名,否則以零分計(jì)。 【審題指導(dǎo)】 細(xì)讀所給的文字提示,提取信息: 1.本篇書面表達(dá)考查的是命題作文; 2.本篇作文的體裁為記敘文,時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí); 3.人稱為第一人稱,詞數(shù)不少于 80。 【擬定提綱】 【我的作品】 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— 范文借鑒 A Pleasant Weekend ? School life is very are looking forward to the ing am I. Now I’ d like to tell you something about my weekend. ? I had a pleasant weekend last Saturday morning, I got up and had breakfast, I went to the park with my father to do knows that doing sports is good for I returned home to do my the afternoon, I had fun playing puter my mother was cooking dinner, I cleaned the livingroom and did some washing. On Sunday morning, I played basketball with my classmates till 11: I went to the beach and enjoyed the bright sunshine with my I listened to pop made me relaxed. ? What a pleasant weekend I had! 借鑒點(diǎn) ? 引出事件:學(xué)校生活忙碌,周末很令人期待,“我”來介紹自己美好的周末。 ? 具體描述:分為周六周天兩個(gè)部分,介紹自己具體的活動(dòng)。 ? 總結(jié)全文:“我”的周末很美好。 文章使用了很多亮點(diǎn)短語,如: look forward to, be good for等,給文章增色不少。