【正文】 __________________ 。 ____________________________________________ 。 ____________________________________________ 。 ____________________________________________ Linda was born in Xi39。an, in 1991. He is a tenyearold boy. He usually wears a pair of glasses. She has two big bright eyes. She has many hobbies. He is good at drawing. 典例剖析 今天是西方的“父親節(jié)”，請根據(jù)以下的提示以“ My Best Dad”為題寫一篇短文介紹自己的父親。 ［ 2022省卷 ］ 要求： 4條內(nèi)容； 、適量拓展； 、連貫，書寫規(guī)范； :80~100詞左右； 、工作單位及考生的任何個人相關(guān)信息。 【 審題思路 】 細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息： ，行文以第三人稱為主； ，所以時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。 【 寫作導(dǎo)圖 】 【 范文賞析 】 My Best Dad ① My dad is the best man I know. He is 45 years old. ② He is so good at making my whole family happy. When he es home from work, he likes to tell us something interesting he39。s heard or read during the day. And his pockets are full of chocolates that always make me happy. He likes eating noodles best. ③ My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way, even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt. ④ This is my best dad. I love him and I39。m so proud of him. ①開頭點(diǎn)明主題，與結(jié)尾相呼應(yīng)。 ②描寫父親的性格特點(diǎn)，愛好以及生活中的趣事。 ③描寫最珍貴的記憶，以及父親對作者本人的教導(dǎo)，也是本篇的關(guān)鍵部分。 ④結(jié)尾再次對父親進(jìn)行評價，使得對父親的感情得以升華 ！ 自我突破 假設(shè) Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒有見面了。上個星期她從國外留學(xué)回來，你們很高興見到彼此。請根據(jù)提示，簡要介紹 Linda的變化。 提示： ：以前個子矮，短發(fā)；現(xiàn)在個子高多了，長發(fā)； ：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天；現(xiàn)在喜歡彈鋼琴、 看書和散步； ：以前學(xué)習(xí)和生活習(xí)慣不好；現(xiàn)在每天按時到校，從不遲到；騎自行車上學(xué)；保護(hù)環(huán)境； ：以前外向，喜歡交朋友；現(xiàn)在有些內(nèi)向。 要求： ，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； ，語言流暢； 。 Linda is my best friend. She has changed a lot in the past two years. ______ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing pingpong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quiet. I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.