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【正文】 時(shí)根據(jù)其隱藏的寓意提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，如在此圖中應(yīng)關(guān)注樹(shù)木被砍伐而提出環(huán)保的重要性?！ W(xué)生作文： Seeing this picture, we know that these trees have been cut down. But as a very little baby in the picture, he must be puzzled. He will ask: What are these? Are these trees? Of course, in our imagination, trees must be tall, strong and green enough. Actually, his question shows humans a problem that is worth thinking about. The covering rate of the forest in the world has kept decreasing these years and it caused a lot of problems on environment. As we all know, trees are very important in our life. They can make the air fresher, reduce natural disasters and soon. So I appeal: Don39。t cut down trees. Let39。 s make our earth greener for our later generation. Don39。t let the children think trees are only roots!教師評(píng)析：整篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，全文分三段，第一段詳細(xì)地描述漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容；第二段闡述其蘊(yùn)涵的寓意即環(huán)保對(duì)于世界和后代們的重要性；第三段提出作者的號(hào)召，使文章的結(jié)尾明快、有力！4. 提示性作文 就是給出一個(gè)標(biāo)題或無(wú)標(biāo)題，給出具體的內(nèi)容，規(guī)定一定的字?jǐn)?shù)，讓考生寫(xiě)出作文。由于這類(lèi)作文已經(jīng)規(guī)定了文章的中心思想和主要內(nèi)容，因此考生可以不再列出提綱，只要把注意力集中在如何正確、完整地用英文詞句表達(dá)出中心思想和內(nèi)容就可以了。 寫(xiě)好提示性作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)： 仔細(xì)審題，明確要求。對(duì)所給信息反復(fù)閱讀，弄清這個(gè)題目要表達(dá)什么，然后對(duì)所給信息進(jìn)行整理、組織，按照自己的寫(xiě)作思路使之條理化。 確保語(yǔ)言精煉。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點(diǎn)去寫(xiě)，不必有太多的發(fā)揮。但也不必按照信息點(diǎn)去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)、句型去體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。掌握好文章的長(zhǎng)度，不要字?jǐn)?shù)過(guò)多或過(guò)少。［例4］你收到一封咨詢(xún)信，請(qǐng)你以旅行社工作人員的身份完成任務(wù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)來(lái)信，從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議。（80字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, ShanghaiDear Ace Travel, I39。m Li Ming, from the east of China. For the ing winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don39。t mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and fortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots? Thanks a lot.Yours, Li Ming 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：這篇作文結(jié)合了提示性作文和應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作要求。首先，我們要讀懂英語(yǔ)提示的內(nèi)容，也就是那封咨詢(xún)信的內(nèi)容。其次，我們要知道書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作方法。針對(duì)本道題，還要注意，這封信是以旅行社工作人員的身份來(lái)寫(xiě)的。最后，還要注意咨詢(xún)信后的要求從下列所給的地方中選擇一個(gè)或兩個(gè)符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議及字?jǐn)?shù)限制。下面，我們來(lái)看看范文是怎么寫(xiě)的。One Possible version: Dear Li Ming, I39。m Gina. It39。s my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and fortable in both places. What39。s more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day. Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It39。s also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ） That39。s just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.Yours, Gina
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