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and fish are good for us. 4. We need to to keep fit, such as . Ending 其他建議 A good state of mind is 5 . important eight hours’ important vegetables fruit do some exercise jogging important 【 自主創(chuàng)作 】 【 范文展示 】 All of us want to be healthy. First, I think sleep is important. Usually we need about eight hours’ sleep every night. Then we will feel active and energetic during the day. A healthy diet is also important. Fresh vegetables and fruit and fish are good for us. We shouldn’t eat snacks and fast food too much, such as hamburgers and Coke. Everyone needs to do some exercise in order to keep fit, such as jogging and playing ball games. Of course there are other ways to keep healthy. I think having a good state of mind is very important. 【 升格點撥 】 1. 短文有幾個承上啟下的連詞,將主要句型連成文章的提綱。 2. 短文語氣簡潔、通順,表達(dá)正確,切中要點。