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ng ... Your opinion ... 注意: 1.表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2. 80詞左右。 參考詞匯: necessary必要的, disagree不同意, be good for對(duì) ?? 有好處 【 審題指導(dǎo) 】 細(xì)讀所給的文字提示,提取信息: 1.暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何度過(guò)假期,家長(zhǎng)和孩子有著各自不同的看法,因此文章為議論文,時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來(lái)時(shí); 2.描述家長(zhǎng)和孩子的不同想法時(shí),應(yīng)該用第三人稱; 3.提示語(yǔ)中要求分別寫(xiě)出家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)和孩子的觀點(diǎn),并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。 【擬定提綱】 【我的作品】 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— How will you spend the ing summer vacation?Parents and kids have their own opinions. ? How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. ? Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the summer, so it’s necessary to take summer courses. They also think kids can do some housework to learn some life many children think ? it’s time to take a good need to hang out with their friends and do some sightseeing. ? In my opinion, we can have a talk with our parents.? All work and no play makes Jack a dull need to relax ourselves after working so hard at ’s good for us to have a trip or do some sports. 范文借鑒 借鑒點(diǎn) ? 以一個(gè)特殊疑問(wèn)句 How...引出要談?wù)摰脑掝}。 ? 使用一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句,并用連詞 so引出家長(zhǎng)的想法。 ? 用 it’ s time to...和 They need to句式來(lái)陳述孩子們的觀點(diǎn)的現(xiàn)實(shí)性。 ? 處用短語(yǔ) in my opinion轉(zhuǎn)入自己的觀點(diǎn),過(guò)渡自然,使敘述富有邏輯性。 ? 諺語(yǔ) “ All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”增加了語(yǔ)言的亮點(diǎn),增強(qiáng)了短文的可讀性。