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traveling is the best way to 而言,旅游是放松的最佳方式。 中間句 1. We are very happy to share the time 興一起共度時光。 2. The next morning, we played with water and caught some fish for ,我們在水中玩耍并捉了些魚吃。 3. I took many photos, ate delicious food and bought special ,吃了美味的食物,買了特別的禮物。 4. We did lots of activities, such as fishing, flying a kite, having a piic and so ,例如釣魚、放風箏、野餐等。 結尾句 1. I hope you will have a good time 里玩得開心。 2. I hope to see / visit...again one day / some 望有一天再去參觀 …… 3. This was a very happy 。 諺語俗語 Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand 萬卷書,行萬里路。 典例運用 【 例 】 [2022 臨沂中考 ]請以 “ My trip to ________” 為題。根據(jù)以下要求與提示,用英語寫一篇短文,記敘你的一次旅行。 [要求 ] 1.請在題目空格處填入你的旅行地點,如: Beijing,Ji’nan 或 Qingdao等; 2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名、校名及其他相關信息,否則不予評分; 3.不少于 60詞。 [提示 ] 1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel about the trip? 【審題指導】 本文是以 “ My trip to ________” 為題寫一篇記敘文,首先根據(jù)題目要求填寫題目上的地點,寫作時,先點明所去的地方,然后重點寫你在那里做了什么,最后寫出自己的感受。人稱用第一人稱,時態(tài)用一般過去時。 【擬定提綱】 【我的作品】 My trip to___ ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— My trip to Beijing I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer vacation. I visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Bird’s took a lot of photos with my met some foreigners and I talked with them in ate Beijing Roast Duck, it was very delicious. I felt a little tired but I was happy. 范文借鑒 借鑒點 ? 這篇短文包含了提示問題的內(nèi)容,講述了自己的旅游經(jīng)歷。 ? 文章使用了 such as, take photos等短語,使文章增色不少。 ? 時態(tài)運用正確,語言簡潔通順。