云南省20xx中考英語第一部分教材知識研究九全units3-4課件-資料下載頁
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【正文】 ，通過事例來證明自己已經長大； ，人稱應為第一人稱。詞數不少于 60詞。 【 寫作導圖 】 I am not a Child Any More Strong and tall Learn to understand and care about others Cook meal and wash feet for my parents I can care about my parents and I am not a child any more 【 范文點評 】 I am not a Child Any More ① I am a 16yearold girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. ① 開門見山，點出自己變化很大，直接引出話題。 ② It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired. I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said，“ Dear, you have grown up.” ② 用具體事例證明自己已經長大：幫父母做飯和洗腳。行文流暢、情感真摯，不失為增分靚點。 ③ It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more. ③ 結尾總結全文，點明文章主題。
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