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mportance of keeping healthy. For me, there are 幾種方法 to keep healthy. First, it is necessary to 做法一 ; Secondly, we shouldn’t做法二 ; Thirdly, it is important to做法三 ... If people follow 幾種方法 ways of keeping fit, they will會有怎樣的改善 . 寫作模板 ( 2022曲靖 ) 提示 :親愛的同學(xué)們,在你的生活或?qū)W習(xí)中一定會有一些好的做法和想法,你可能希望與他人分享 ,或倡議他人與你一同去做。請結(jié)合你的經(jīng)驗(yàn)、愛好以及社會關(guān)注的一些問題 把題目“ Let’s_____ ”補(bǔ)充完整。然后用英語寫一篇短文。例如,你可以寫 Let’s make a banana milk shake/keep healthy /get on well with parents/save water... 典例剖析 要求 : ,短文詞數(shù)不少于 60。 ,內(nèi)容連貫,書寫規(guī)范,卷面整潔 . 、校名,否則以零分計(jì)。 ,抄襲部分不給分。 【 審題指導(dǎo) 】 仔細(xì)讀題,提取以下信息: 1. 本題要求寫一篇短文談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,因此體裁是議論文。 2. 時(shí)態(tài)涉及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。 3. 保持健康的方法,至少要寫出三條。 4. 詞數(shù)不少于 60,不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。 【 寫作導(dǎo)圖 】 Lest’s keep healthy Introduction What did I do in the past What am I going to do It’s very important to keep healthy. Didn’t care about my health。 Hardly ever exercised。 Liked junk food。 Used to stay up and get up late Exercise every day。 Eat more vegetables and fruits。 Go to bed early 【 范文點(diǎn)評 】 Let’s Keep Healthy ① I think it’s very important to keep healthy. It can help us to live a happy life. ① 直接點(diǎn)題,說明健康的重要性。 ② However, I didn’t care about my health in the past. I hardly ever exercised. I didn’t like eating vegetables. I liked junk food and ate it every day. I used to stay up and get up late. ② 介紹自己過去的不良生活習(xí)慣。 ③ I want to be healthy. Firstly, I’m going to exercise every day. Secondly, I’m going to eat more vegetables and fruits. And I will go to bed early. ④ I think we can take some other ways to keep healthy. ③ 分條說明自己以后保持健康的做法。 ④點(diǎn)明保持健康的方式不只是這些。