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(neither... nor... all the year round);近年來(lái)變化快速 (rapidly change);主要旅游景點(diǎn) (major tourist sites); 結(jié)尾 熱愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng),歡迎來(lái)此,望玩得愉快(love...wele...enjoy oneself)。 【 寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 】 【 寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 】 Kunming is beautiful Location and weather Enjoy yourself here changes and major tourist sites 【 范文點(diǎn)評(píng) 】 Kunming is Beautiful ① My hometown is Kunming. It’s really a beautiful city. It’s in the southwest of China and it is the capital city of Yunnan Province. It’s neither too hot nor too cold all year round. There are over five million people in Kunming. Its flowers are famous all over the world. ① 直點(diǎn)主題; ② Kunming is a beautiful city with a long history of 2, 000 years. ③ The face of Kunming has rapidly changed with streets widened. Besides, many office buildings and housing projects has appeared in recent years. ② 點(diǎn)出昆明歷史悠久; ③點(diǎn)出昆明的變化大; ④ Major tourist sites in Kunming include two Tang Dynasty Pagodas, Yuantong Temple, Yunnan Provincial Museum, Kunming City Museum, and Green Lake Park. ⑤ I love my hometown very much and wele to Kunming and enjoy yourself here. ④ 轉(zhuǎn)入介紹旅游景點(diǎn); ⑤結(jié)尾:表達(dá)對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛(ài)和美好祝愿。 ⑤結(jié)尾:表達(dá)對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛(ài)和美好祝愿。