【導讀】中的“意志力”和“force”的區(qū)別，而正是這些區(qū)別導致了一個人是否能成功。事例、數(shù)據(jù)論述指出“只有盲目的意志力”失敗的必然，話鋒一轉，提出自己的不同觀點。第二段，作者以自己為例，一針見血地指出“wanttodo”和“havetodo”的區(qū)別，指出成功做事。情的前提是從自己的意愿和情況出發(fā)，制定好合理的計劃后，“真正的成功關乎行動”。初的階段迫使自己做下去，而到后來，這種“force”就變成了令人愉快的習慣。整體來看，本文立意新穎，使用確切數(shù)字論證，嚴謹充分，邏輯嚴謹，不落窠臼。語言表達明白流暢，的使用得文章銜接有序，條理清晰，值。細看題目說明中給出了提示，要求考生結合戒煙屢次不成功的幽默引語對該話題進行分析。的其他事情，并復述堅強意志的內涵，點題收尾。數(shù)，反而成為失分點，這一點要引以為戒。四級寫作體裁有三種：論說文、應用文及圖表作文。本文的整體內容可以分為三段，中心應該圍繞“wherethereisawill,thereisaway”，首段可以

　　

【正文】 Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is pletely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep fing ahead with strong consciousness. From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last. 2020年 12月英語四級作文范文外教版 Part I Writing Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Essay 1 Selfhelp books and online coaches tell us that we have to use our willpower to “force” ourselves to acplish our goals and to plete all of our tasks. Forcing ourselves only goes so far, however. Take dieting, for instance. If you want to lose 12 kilos and you think you have to force yourself to only eat cucumbers every day, you’ll quit. It’s the same with smoking or exercising. If your only weapon is willpower, then you’ll probably fail. Niynine percent of New Year’s resolutions are abandoned before the end of January. In my opinion, it’s true that nothing succeeds without strong will, but I have a different definition of the word. For me, strong will means that I have the power to set my own goals and the intention to plete them. If I want to do something instead of have to do something, I’m much more likely to finish the task. I have to have good reasons to keep me going when times get tough. Therefore, if I want to go on a diet, I’ll choose a diet that I can stick with and have a good reason why I want to do it—to be healthier—not just to lose weight. That way, I’m willing to maintain the new menu. If I want to exercise more, I’ll make a plan that I can live with and I’ll do a sport I like so that I’ll stick with it. True success is about action. When we set a goal, it’s like a race. At first we might have to “force” ourselves, but then the actions should bee pleasurable habits that we’re willing to do if we want to get to the finish line. Cindy Savage has more than 35 years of experience as a teacher, principal and administrator of schools in the ., South America and China. In addition, she’s a writing expert with 40+ published novels for young people and 100+textbooks to her credit. Her specialty is training students to write and speak with clarity, enthusiasm and style. She’s taught workshops worldwide, has published hundreds of articles on the subject, including a regular column for the Shanghai Student Post.