【正文】 段落的標(biāo)準(zhǔn) ? 首先，一個(gè)段落必須有一個(gè)中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達(dá)。整個(gè)段落必須緊扣這個(gè)主題，這就是段落的統(tǒng)一性(unity)。 ? 其次，一個(gè)段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個(gè)完整的感覺，這就是 完整性 (pleteness or adequateness) ? 再者，一個(gè)段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機(jī)的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個(gè)句子到另一個(gè)句子的過渡必須流暢 (smooth)， 這就是 連貫性 (coherence)。 My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my fivefeet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twentypound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 文章的組織結(jié)構(gòu) 文章的組織 (全 ).doc ? 羅列 → 分析 → 結(jié)論 ? 觀點(diǎn) → 論證 → 提出建議 ? 主題 → 羅列 → 總結(jié) ? 提出問題 → 分析問題 → 解決問題H:\writing\文章的組織 (全 ).doc ? 擺出事實(shí) → 說明道理 → 提出看法 ? ..\..\writing\擺事實(shí)等 .doc 十句作文法 ? 整篇作文遵照三段 10句的模式，其基本結(jié)構(gòu)如下： ? Passage One Sentence One General talk of the topic ? Sentence Two Thesis: the writer’s attitude towards it ? Passage Two Sentence Three The writer’s reason to have this attitude ? Sentence Four Support One ? Sentence Five Detail One ? Sentence Six Detail Two ? Sentence Seven Support Two ? Sentence Eight Detail One ? Sentence Nine Detail two ? Passage Three Sentence Ten Conclusion: restate the thesis ? 、 ? 四級(jí)作文 \十句作文法及范例（附錄） .doc Changes in People’s Diet (1) According to a recent survey, rice, the staple food of most Chinese, is now playing less important role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased. (2) A key change has taken place on the family dining table in the last ten years. (3) There are two factors leading to the change. (4) For one thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living. (5) In the old days few people could afford meat and mild every day, which often meant a big chunk of the family ine. (6) But now people have enough money to taste a rich variety of foods. (7) For another, people of today pay more attention to nutrition. (8) They are not merely content to fill their stomach. (9) They are seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their health. (10) In short, with people’s standards of living getting higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious and greater. Traffic Accidents () in a City month injured dead 7 20 3 8 22 4 9 26 5 10 31 7 11 35 8 12 40 14 文體寫作 – 圖 表作文 ? 例 There are more and more traffic accidents in the city. Take the chart as an example. In August of 1987 there were 22 people injured and 4 killed。 in September 26 injured, 5 killed。 in October 31 injured, 7 killed。 in November 35 injured。 in December 49 injured, 14 killed. ? 例 According to the chart, we can see that more and more traffic accidents are taking place in the city. The department taking charge of traffic administration should pay more attention. ? The cause of traffic accidents is plex. I guess the first factor is the neglect of road construction. 例 Traffic accidents are being more and more serious in the city, and more and more people involved are injured and killed. From the chart we can see that within half a year of 1987, totally 224 people became the victim of traffic accidents. 183 injured and 41 killed. To make matter worse, accident toll increased all the time. Each month there were at least three more people involved in accidents, and in December the increase was spectacular: pared with November, injured increased by 40% and death by 75%. 寫作模板 ——圖表式作文 ? It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of … (多少 ). What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … ( 多少 ) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …( 第一個(gè)原因 ). More importantly, …( 第二個(gè)原因 ). Most important of all, …( 第三個(gè)原因 ). From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken). 四六級(jí)寫作的基本策略 改變一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)觀念 了解作文題型特點(diǎn) 背誦常用承接詞、句型及段落寫作套路 把握 4個(gè)關(guān)鍵步驟 1） 認(rèn)真審題，明確三方面問題 ..\ .ppt 2） 擴(kuò)展提示句 ,草擬提綱 3） 依據(jù)所擬提綱，寫出段落主題句 ..\ 4） 參照提綱，緊扣主題句，完成段落 ..\段落 .ppt 5 、檢查四個(gè)重點(diǎn)部位 6 、其他注意事項(xiàng) Thanks for listening!