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【導(dǎo)讀】能簡單，描述人物，場。所，活動或事件。表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)，情感和態(tài)度等.審題時圈出要點(diǎn)并。審?fù)觐}一句話概括題意。堅(jiān)持原則，靈活變動?；匚拈喿x，對照清單。過參與這樣的活動你有何感受或變化？開頭段，中間段，結(jié)尾段。段式容易寫偏題。
【正文】 food, like vegetables 5. drink more water / have some chicken soup which will make you feel better 6. listen to music and relax yourself 7. stop exercising for two or three days 鼓勵性的話語： 1. keep cheerful / be happy 2. … needn’t worry about the PE exam。 it’s just a piece of cake 3. I think you can get over it. 4. Never give up. 5. You’ll be better soon. 此類作文中學(xué)生們的普遍問題： 一類 是提建議的常用句型沒有背下來，寫作時句型單調(diào)；語法錯誤嚴(yán)重?；驘o法擺脫母語干擾。 另一類 是會背幾個句型，但提不出什么建議來，屬于無話可說型。 第三種情況 是能寫出幾條建議，由于沒有支撐句作后續(xù)，作文顯得空洞無物。 Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you’re not feeling well. Don’t worry, you will feel better soon. You’d better meet the doctor with your parents. And have some medicine. If you ill trouble, my suggest is have a nice rest every night. As for homework. If you feeling trouble. You can not do your homework and tomorrow you tell your teacher you are ill. At last you must pay attention to you clothes. You should wear some warm clothes! 此文的問題是： “要參加體育測試，生病，心情焦急” 來提建議。即： 文不對題 ，語法錯誤嚴(yán)重。 …. I can give you some advice s. First, you should stay in home (and)have a rest. Don’t fet to eat medicine. I know you very naughty, but heathy is the first. Second, don’t worry about. We can help you have sports every day, and we can tell teacher help you. Don’t worry about we have a lot of idea help you. At last, I hope you as soon as possible heathy good. 此文的問題： ，語法錯誤嚴(yán)重。 ，漢語式思維的句子較多。 ，語氣過于生硬。 …I think if you can you should better go to the hospital. Because the doctors can give you more help than me. And if you want to go to the hospital, you also can rest in the your room and call doctor up. Befor he arrived you can drink a cup of juice. Juice can make you happy and fet your problems. Then you also can call your parents up, they can look after you last, don’t worry about you PE exam, it’s 此文的問題： 1. 審題嚴(yán)重偏差。 2. 語法錯誤嚴(yán)重，無法順利表達(dá)完整句。 3. 邏輯思維不清。 如：原文 Juice can make you happy and fet your problems. 此句譯為：果汁能使你快樂，也能忘記你的煩惱。（ 注：果汁這么有本事？ ） 再如： 原文 And if you want to go to the hospital, you also can rest in the your room and call doctor up. 注 ：“想 去 醫(yī)院”， “就 呆 在房間”，哪國有這等好事？
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