【正文】 he academic atmosphere. As far as I am concerned , I like some books which introduce the foreign customs and colorful cultures in the world. I think they are really interesting. What about you? What’s your opinion about the activity? I really hope that the activity will be successful by( with ) our joint efforts. Yours ever 身體健康 工作順利 范例 1： 2021屆高三英語 周練二 高中生活是人的一生中很美好的時(shí)光，除了學(xué)業(yè)之外 我們還經(jīng)歷、感悟了許多。為了不留遺憾，在臨近畢 時(shí)，你將做些什么呢？根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文 要抓緊時(shí)間溫書迎考； 要主動(dòng)與對(duì)你有誤解的同學(xué)溝通； 要向老師父母感恩； 其他你認(rèn)為值得做的事情 。 注意： ，以使行文連貫； 2．短文詞數(shù)： 120左右 3. 短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation. Step 1: The key points 要點(diǎn) 1：要抓緊時(shí)間溫書迎考 ? make full/good use of time to go over lessons and get ready for the ing examination ? make the best of time to go through the things we have learned and prepare for the important test ? put a lot of effort into the preparations for the ing examination ? make every effort to revise the things we have learned in class in order to be ready for the entrance examination to college 要點(diǎn) 2：要主動(dòng)與對(duì)你有誤解的同學(xué)溝通 ? It is necessary to have a hearttoheart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me. ? I want to spend some time having a chat with my classmates who might have a little misunderstanding with me. ? In order to improve the relationship with my classmates who might have misunderstood me I will spare some time to have a talk with them. 要點(diǎn) 3：要向老師父母感恩 ? express my gratitude to all the teachers with whose help I have made great progress and my parents who have taken so good care of me ? show my respect for all the teachers who have led us into the world of books as well as my parents who have brought us so well ? say thanks to all the teachers and my parents without whose help I couldn’t have grown up well and made such continuous progress 要點(diǎn) 4：其他你認(rèn)為值得做的事情 ? do something for my class and school ? hold a party to celebrate the graduation ? read more books in the library for fun ? join some interesting clubs, such as an English club, swimming club and so on ? have sports because health is the most important to us ? bee a volunteer and help others ? take some photos of teachers, classmates, classrooms and the campus as reminders 這部分作文是開放式的，可以充分發(fā)揮想象 Step 2: Possible versions Version 1: We all value the time we spent in high school. Besides studies, there seems to be a lot I really want to do before graduation. In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my time to go over the lessons and spare no effort to realize my dream of entering a good university. Meanwhile, I think it necessary for me to have a heartto heart talk with whoever might have misunderstood me, for I do treasure friendship. In addition, doing something for my class and my school is also included in my plan. Above all, I’d like to express my gratitude to all the teachers with whose help I have made continuous progress in the past three years and my parents who have taken so good care of me. Finally, I would like to take some photos of my teachers, classmates and school as reminders. 范例 2： 假如你是 Lily, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示和要求給你的外國筆友 Peter 寫一封信。 如何度過了高三學(xué)習(xí)的第一個(gè)月？ 想在明年高考考那所大學(xué)？為什么要考這所大學(xué)？ 為了實(shí)現(xiàn)你的目標(biāo)，今后要做哪些方面的努力？ 注意： 1. 詞數(shù)： 120左右 2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Peter, How are things with you? Are you still working on your paper? ____________________________ Best wishes, 總體優(yōu)點(diǎn)： 1） 各個(gè)要點(diǎn)分段落寫，文章結(jié)構(gòu)較清楚。 2）漢語式的英語開始減少。 3）能根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況或虛構(gòu)情節(jié)完成寫作，符合半開放作文的寫作要求。 存在缺點(diǎn)： 1） 還是有些低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，如情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后加 to、 拼寫錯(cuò)誤、和語法上、搭配上的錯(cuò)誤： the Xiamen University, e true my dream, 將 hardworking當(dāng)作主語或賓語用等。 2）有些作文字?jǐn)?shù)太少 3) 有些作文收尾不自然。 高三（ 12）班 林誠 22分 How time flies! The ( This ) September has quickly passed ( passed before we knew it ).Just you had ( 不用 had )pointed out, the life of Senior 3 is filled with both challenges and difficulties. I did feel stressful ( under much stress)for some time ( from time to time )due to the huge amount of homework ,but fortunately I managed to calm my mind( calm myself ) and found( find ) a more effective way to learn. To tell you the truth, I really dream of being admitted to Peking University next year. Its fascinating history and impressive learning atmosphere have been attracting me since I was young( little ). Also, I think it will give me more chances to develop my abilities. However, the road to success is sure to be tough. In order to realize my dream, I must make better use of time and study more effectively. What’s more, I have to be calm enough to cope with all the troubles , always adopting a positive attitude to the details I may e across while studying. Last but not the least, I will work steadily for my goal , not ( without) being too stressful ( nervous, stressful 多跟 life, job 等連用 )all the time. 要有一兩個(gè)更好的結(jié)束句 。 One possible version: Dear Peter, How are things with you? Are you still working on your paper? Last month most of my time was divided between attending classes, doing homework and going over lessons. That is perhaps a life every Senior 3 student has to live. I have had the dream of going to Beijing University since I went to senior high school. Next year I will pete for one place there because it is a world class university, where I will get better trained and my pursuit of knowledge will go further with the help Of excellent teachers there. To be admitted to Beijing University, I should work even harder. I should adapt myself to the tight s