【正文】 extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。3．書面表達(dá)地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應(yīng)該好好保護(hù)地球?，F(xiàn)在正在倡導(dǎo)“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費(fèi)地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容應(yīng)該包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1. 節(jié)約用水、用電；2. 節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護(hù)森林；3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土地上種樹；4. 不亂丟雜物，保護(hù)環(huán)境；要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；80詞左右提示詞：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won39。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。t throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定結(jié)構(gòu)But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4．假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)東五一小長假的旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。(1)5月1日天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。(2)早上7：30我們乘京津城際鐵路出發(fā)，車程大約半小時(shí)。(3)上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識(shí)，并為朋友們購買了禮物。(4)第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午去位于市中心的王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。(5)我的旅游感受……參考詞匯:京津城際鐵路 BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway王府井大街 Wangfujing Street故宮 the Palace Museum北京烤鴨 Peking Roast Duck要求：(1)詞數(shù):80～100個(gè)。(2)短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。A Trip to BeijingDuring the May Day Holiday，I______________________________________________________________【答案】During the May Day Holiday, I went to Beijing for a visit with my parents. We left Tianjin at 7:30 on the morning of May 1st, and we took the BeijingTianjin Intercity Railway to get there. It was a fast and fortable journey and it took us about half an hour to arrive there. To our joy, the weather was pleasant. And we began our twodaytrip in Beijing.First of all, we went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. We were very excited when we saw the Palace Museum and took a lot of photos there. We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum.On early morning of the second day, we went to walk up the Great Wall. It was one of the most famous wonders in the world. Millions of tourists from all over the world visit it every year. After that, we took the underground to the city center, Wangfujing Street .At that moment, we all felt very hungry, so we decided to try Peking Roast Duck. In my opinion, Beijing food was very delicious.During this trip, I not only tried the delicious Beijing food, but also learned more about the Chinese traditional culture as well as the long history of China. Though I felt tired after the trip, it was a meaningful experience and I will never forget it.【解析】【詳解】以 “A Trip to Beijing”為題，寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。記敘自己的一次旅行，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過去時(shí)，敘述事實(shí)的時(shí)候以時(shí)間為順序。用合適的連詞把各句連接成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體，同時(shí)要用相對高級的詞匯提升文章的層次和文采。在發(fā)表你的看法的時(shí)候，寫作的時(shí)候要注意要點(diǎn)的全覆蓋，不能有遺漏或省略，同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。同時(shí)要注意使用合適的連接詞和較高級的詞匯。注意所使用的語法規(guī)則的準(zhǔn)確性和合理性。變化使用多種句式讓文章更有亮點(diǎn)。We listened to the tour guide, and knew more knowledge about our Chinese history and traditional culture. What39。s more, I bought my good friends many lovely presents which is related to the theme of the Palace Museum..等這些句子運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。5．你有沒有因?yàn)闆]能好好管理時(shí)間而影響了學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷?請你寫一篇文章談?wù)勥@件事及你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：（事情，原因及后果）；。作文要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。、校名和地名。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 【答案】Once, I couldn39。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in t