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ought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫作時(shí),注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順,詞匯書寫無(wú)誤,不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。7.書面表達(dá)我們?cè)谏钪锌偸敲鎸?duì)著各種各樣的壓力,這會(huì)嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正開(kāi)辟專欄討論中學(xué)生如何減壓。假設(shè)你叫李華,請(qǐng)從以下幾個(gè)方面,用英語(yǔ)寫出你的具體做法,向該欄目投稿。;;;。參考詞匯:stressed 注意:;;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,39。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。8.假如你是韓梅,你的一位英國(guó)筆友Kate發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件,說(shuō)她下星期來(lái)中國(guó),她向你詢問(wèn)中國(guó)的餐桌禮儀。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示給她回一封電子郵件,告訴她有關(guān)情況。詞數(shù)80~100。提示:;;;;、健康、成功干杯……Dear kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the Chinese table manners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Kate,I’m glad to receive your . Now I want to tell you something about the chinese table manners.In China. the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders begin. You can’t tap bowls with the chopsticks. You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to eat. You can eat until everyone is at the table. Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or hostess.Wele to China!Yours,Han Mei【解析】【詳解】本文是書信寫作,注意書信寫作格式,開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾。把自己當(dāng)做韓梅,切不可在文中出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)名字等信息。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)來(lái)寫作。學(xué)生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料中給出的短語(yǔ)及相關(guān)信息,認(rèn)真審題,確定文章的中心。在寫作的文章具有一定的連貫性,還應(yīng)注意使用一些連接詞,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性和條理性。寫作時(shí)還要注意:;,使內(nèi)容充實(shí),行文連貫;,有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤等。高分句型:In 。the host or hostess doesn’t eat every dish first until the guests and elders ,主人不會(huì)先把每道菜都吃完。You shouldn’t reach across the table or in front of someone to get something to 。Besides, you should toast longevity, good health or success of the host or ,你應(yīng)該為主人的長(zhǎng)壽、健康或成功干杯?!军c(diǎn)睛】注意寫作過(guò)程中,將要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)并表達(dá)清楚,注意使用英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)典句型,避免出現(xiàn)漢語(yǔ)表達(dá)。9.書面表達(dá)假如你是李華,馬上將要中學(xué)畢業(yè),一路上肯定有很多人幫助或者鼓勵(lì)過(guò)你。某英文雜志社正向九年級(jí)畢業(yè)生征文,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇題為“Thank you, My ________”的短文,將你對(duì)你的父母、老師、朋友或同學(xué)的感謝表達(dá)出來(lái)。要求:(1)將標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整,80詞左右;(2) 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(3) 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。Thank you, My_______________【答案】Thank you, my teacher! I39。d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang, because she39。s helped me a lot. Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I39。ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.Thank you, my dear teacher! The love and support from you will be with me forever.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文,以“Thank you, My teacher ”為題,寫一篇短文,感謝我的老師。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱為單數(shù)第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I39。d like to……,When she found……,She was always patient to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我要感謝我的老師王小姐,接下來(lái)介紹她對(duì)我的幫助,最后表示從老師那里得到的愛(ài)和支持將永遠(yuǎn)和我在一起。此處would like to, encourage sb to do sth, promise to do sth, turn to sb for help, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。