【正文】 邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8． 《朗讀者》、《中國詩詞大會(huì)》等文化類節(jié)目喚醒了中國人的閱讀情結(jié)。為了激發(fā)市民們的閱讀興趣,廣州開展了“書香羊城”活動(dòng)。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀銓?duì)閱讀的看法,并對(duì)如何培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)提出建議。閱讀的好處 閱讀使人睿智補(bǔ)充12個(gè)看法 培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣每天至少閱讀20分鐘補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)觀看《朗讀者》,分享節(jié)目推薦的好作品。補(bǔ)充12個(gè)建議注意::《朗讀者》(Readers): 作品: works (n.):(文章的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)):、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分.The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou “has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The activity of “Reading in Guangzhou” has been held in Guangzhou for quite a while. Reading makes us wise . It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. We should spend at least twenty minutes in reading after class. What’s more, try to make notes for good points while reading. We can also hold some reading activities in our class. For example, watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after class.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，內(nèi)容包括提示內(nèi)容以及談?wù)勛约簩?duì)閱讀的看法，并對(duì)培養(yǎng)閱讀習(xí)慣和開展班級(jí)閱讀活動(dòng)方面提出建議，人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯關(guān)系更為緊密。高分句型：1. It can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring us happiness. 它不僅能幫助我們更多地了解這個(gè)世界，而且能帶給我們幸福。not only …but also… 不但……而且……，并列連詞短語。2. Keeping reading every day is a good habit. 每天堅(jiān)持閱讀是一個(gè)好習(xí)慣。Keeping reading every day動(dòng)名詞短語作主語。3. Also, a book corner can be set up in our classroom so that we can read at any time after ，我們的教室里還可以設(shè)置一個(gè)讀書角，以便課后隨時(shí)閱讀。此句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句，主句是含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，so that引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句。9．書面表達(dá)校園安全問題越來越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長和老師。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。