【正文】 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, Failure is the mother of success.I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my helped me out. He told me not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求介紹介紹失敗的經歷，及從中的收獲和感想。描述經歷用過去時態(tài)。2. 例文點評：這篇短文條理通暢，能將要點表達完整。句式豐富，能運用連詞使文章更有邏輯同時運用了大量的短語。3. 高分亮點：短語和連詞的使用：be full of ，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!9．書面表達。，你最近認識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進初三以來在學習和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。請根據(jù)下面的提示及你的實際寫封回信。 提示：less free time，much homework，more pressure，get into a good high schoolmore exercise，lose weight join the English Comer，improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful，learn more knowledge注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2）回復須包括所有藥店，可適當發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3）文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. 【答案】Dear David，Thank you so much for your mail. I39。m happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently. In the past , I had a lot of free time. In my free time , I used to take more exercise to lose weight. My life has changed a lot since I got into a good high school. I have more pressure . I have much homework to do every day . I have less free time to do leisure activities. In my spare time , I join in the English corner to practice my spoken English. This improves my English a lot . I learn more knowledge . My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.Best wishes，Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)題干“假如你是李華，你最近認識的美國筆友David給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，向了解你進初三以來在學習和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受?！币罂芍疚挠矛F(xiàn)在完成時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱是第一人稱。英語作文一般分為三個部分：第一部分：開篇點題——介紹我進初三以來在學習和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。第二部分：文章主體——根據(jù)提示內容，依次介紹我進初三以來在學習和生活方面的一些變化、收獲和感受。這里要分為三個小節(jié)：小節(jié)1：過去我的學習和生活是什么樣的——有肯多課余時間做自己喜歡的事情。用一般過去時。小節(jié)2：進初三以來在學習和生活方面發(fā)生了變化。用現(xiàn)在完成時。小節(jié)3：介紹現(xiàn)在的生活狀態(tài)——忙碌的學習。用一般現(xiàn)在時。第三部分：總結全文——我的生活很忙但是很有意義。