【正文】 r in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話(huà)題作文，介紹自己難忘的人或事。【詳解】，確定寫(xiě)作的目標(biāo)，寫(xiě)自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事，描述難忘的人用第三人稱(chēng)，講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”，敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了，注意短語(yǔ)、句型的正確使用。，開(kāi)頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，緊扣主題，前呼后應(yīng)。：巧用連詞， not only…but also，because of as well as，so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合；短語(yǔ)how to do sth，teach sb to do sth，care for也為文章的語(yǔ)言增色不少。8． 近年來(lái)，隨著智能手機(jī)的普及，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生開(kāi)始使用手機(jī)來(lái)完成家庭作業(yè)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論，為此，英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開(kāi)設(shè)專(zhuān)欄討論這一話(huà)題，你采訪了一些同學(xué)，寫(xiě)了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：支持者反對(duì)者學(xué)生們可以經(jīng)常利用手機(jī)操練說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。自從使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，視力變差。一個(gè)理由……(12句)一個(gè)理由……(12句)你喜歡在用app學(xué)習(xí)嗎？給出你的理由……(23句)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；；，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；，寫(xiě)在試卷其他部位無(wú)效。Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. 【答案】Would you like to study on apps?Smartphones are being more and more popular nowadays, more and more students like to use them to study. Students can often practice speaking English on phones. There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干，這是屬于看法類(lèi)的作文，那么在寫(xiě)這類(lèi)作文時(shí)，首先要分別寫(xiě)出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因，最后要說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來(lái)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。亮點(diǎn)詞匯短語(yǔ)：practice doing ；learn by oneself自學(xué)；lead to導(dǎo)致；it is adj. for us to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)，做某事是怎樣的；in a proper way以適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞?。亮點(diǎn)句型：There are many exercises on apps, this makes it easier for us to learn by ，這使我們更容易自己學(xué)習(xí)。Make it + adj.+ for sb to do sth.Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. 自從他們使用手機(jī)以來(lái)，他們的視力變得更差了。they can’t help playing with other apps while 。Can’t help doing sth情不自禁地做某事。9．書(shū)面表達(dá)。因?qū)W習(xí)壓力大，部分中學(xué)生的身體健康狀況有所下降，這一情況已經(jīng)引起社會(huì)的關(guān)注和教育部門(mén)的高度重視。假若你是來(lái)自九年級(jí)三班的李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份不少于80詞的倡議書(shū)。建議大家積極多參加體育活動(dòng)，提高身體素質(zhì)。不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名。要點(diǎn)：1. 鍛煉身體的好處： strong， healthy...2. 鍛煉身體的方式： play ball games， running， swimming...3. 請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)學(xué)校開(kāi)展體育鍛煉的看法和建議。要求：1. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。Dear schoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Li Hua【答案】Dear shoolmates,I am Li Hua from Class Three,Grade Nine. Health is very important to us teenagers. Either study or work is based on a strong body. Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy. If we don’t take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily. Just as we often say, “Exercise one hour a day keeps illness away. ”There are many kinds of sports we can do, such as running, swimming and playing ball games. But we have to do too much homework after school, I hope teachers will give us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports. I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us. In order to build ourselves stronger and stronger,let’s take active part in all kinds of sports in proper time. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話(huà)題作文。講述鍛煉身體的好處、鍛煉的方式，并建議大家積極參加體育活動(dòng)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如either...or..., be based on, keep healthy, such as, have time to do, take part in, in order to, stronger and stronger以及all kinds of等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。