【正文】 表達流感季通常在每年的10月份到3月份爆發(fā)，據(jù)報道114個美國孩子在今年2月死于流感。流感季節(jié)我們應該如何保持健康呢？易患病人群老人和孩子原因1. 免疫系統(tǒng)弱；2. 流感知識缺乏：流感病毒引起流感；口、鼻、手傳播；公共場所人與人近距離傳播；3. …… （至少1點）預防措施1. 多鍛煉；2. 注意保暖；3. …… （至少1點）要求:1. 所寫內容必須包括提供的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮；2. 文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名等信息。參考詞匯：weaker immune systems （較弱的免疫系統(tǒng)）；influenza virus （流感病毒）The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. ____________________________________________________________________【答案】The flu （流感）season runs from October to March every year. This year it has been especially bad. It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February. The flu hits children and elderly people the hardest. This is because they have weaker immune system. It is easy for them to get the flu. In fact, most people don’t know much about the flu. The influenza virus causes the flu. The virus can get on your hands. If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu. Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in public. How do we keep the flu away? We should get lots of rest and exercise. Put on enough clothes to keep warm. Take a shower every day and wash hands often. Remember if anyone around us has the flu, take it seriously and make sure they go to the hospital as soon as possible.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如from to，every year，get the flu，in fact，get on，pay no attention to，spread from，person to person，in public，keep away，lots of，put on，take a shower，make sure，go to the hospital，as soon as possible等。而It is reported that 114 children in the US died in February./ If you touch your nose or mouth, you can get the flu./ Because some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著網(wǎng)絡的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學習模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學習（online learning）”這一新的學習模式備受青睞。假設你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學生是否應該通過網(wǎng)絡進行在線學習。以下是你所在班級的討論情況，請你給該報投稿，反映討論結果并談談你自己的想法。提示：觀點贊成反對理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學習內容和時間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實2. 長時間用電腦對眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當發(fā)揮。向子結構準確，要點齊全，內容合理，篇章結構連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“網(wǎng)上學習（online learning）”為話題，結合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學習的兩種不同的觀點。根據(jù)內容提示可知本文應運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動名詞作主語等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學習。16．（湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長嶺中學中考模擬）書面表達。現(xiàn)在提倡全民閱讀，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以”reading”為題的英語征文活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿。提示：？？？要求：80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。Reading ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要按照要求以“閱讀”為主題寫作，要寫出讀書的好處、中學生可以讀的書、你的讀書計劃。按照要求逐條描述即可，但要注意增添相關細節(jié)使得文章連貫。寫作亮點：總起要對reading做一個概括，用到了“plays an important role”（扮演重要的角色）這一搭配，關于讀書的好處提到了：open our minds（開闊思維），relax（放松）。關于可以讀的書，介紹了幾種文本（textbooks, newspapers and magazine），關于介紹讀書計劃，描述了自己讀書的頻率，最后，有引用諺語，也是一個亮點。17．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。學校英語?？队⒄Z天地》對此進行調查，假如你是一名?？∮浾撸埬憔痛舜握{查的結果進行總結，并談談你自己的觀點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won