【正文】 isiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。8．書面表達初中的生活美好而短暫。臨近中考，壓力驟增，父母的嘮叨，老師的殷殷期望，自己的學(xué)業(yè)與夢想……傾訴是一副良方。請給七月的你寫一封信，談?wù)勀闵磉叴嬖诘膯栴}，你打算如何解決，鼓勵自己生活還有詩和遠方。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一封給自己的信。要求：1．表達清楚，語法正確，語句通順，上下文連貫； 2．必須包括思維導(dǎo)圖中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） Dear Future Me, It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that … Your sincerely【答案】It is pleasant to spare my free time to municate with you．I am so worried that I can’t deal with all the problems present, which are mainly caused by two ,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation .With the price of houses rising, they always work hard. However, they are more worried about their children’s exam as the final exam is approaching. Second, there is endless homework and tests every day. Therefore, I need change myself. In order to adapt to the situation better, I should develop good life habits to keep healthy. Then making friends and municating with them can make me happier. What’s more, there exist dreams and beautiful future waiting for us. I should not be pessimistic (悲觀的). So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily. I believe I deserve having success.【解析】【詳解】本文寫給未來的自己，目的在于傾訴壓力，尋求方法，并重拾信心。第一段指出導(dǎo)致壓力的兩個方面First,I can’t ignore my parents’ expectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。9．書面表達。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國，指的是對職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計劃的過程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請以此為主題寫一篇短文。寫作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準備(學(xué)習(xí)、興趣發(fā)展等)；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準備，最后表示只要我有機會，我將會選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。