【正文】 組織的國(guó)外冬令營(yíng),看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁(yè)后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營(yíng)期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。內(nèi)容包括：；(包含冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間,聽(tīng)Liz Payne的講座)；。作文要求：；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名；,詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I’m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. What’s more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I’m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫(xiě)一個(gè)留言。文章內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)部分：首先是介紹自己的身份；然后寫(xiě)留言的目的，包括冬令營(yíng)的時(shí)間、想要去參觀London Canal Museum以及聽(tīng)Liz Payne的講座；最后簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下你的預(yù)期的收獲。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，應(yīng)根據(jù)題目的這些要求，組織語(yǔ)言，串聯(lián)成一篇短文。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱(chēng)I來(lái)敘述，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。注意英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)和漢語(yǔ)習(xí)慣是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，使用正確的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以及適當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性和語(yǔ)言的地道。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。穿插一些高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式，提升文章檔次和水平，使表達(dá)更加流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息，沒(méi)有遺漏要點(diǎn)。作者主要從三個(gè)方面敘述：首先介紹了自己的身份和寫(xiě)留言的目的；接下來(lái)詳細(xì)介紹了自己參加這次冬令營(yíng)的愿望；最后是一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)尾。如果分段敘述效果則會(huì)更好，那樣會(huì)使文章的層次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)，文章以第一人稱(chēng)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā)，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，符合英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了一些復(fù)合句和較高級(jí)的句型，如I’m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter ；From , I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter ；And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn 。整篇文章語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。6．假如你是李華, 正在美國(guó)格林中學(xué)做交換生?為了讓更多的人了解中華文化, 你打算向?qū)W校申請(qǐng)建立一個(gè)社團(tuán)( Chinese Culture Club)?請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給學(xué)校負(fù)責(zé)老師Mr. Lee 寫(xiě)一份申請(qǐng), 內(nèi)容包括建立該社團(tuán)的原因及社團(tuán)的主要活動(dòng)安排?提示詞語(yǔ): spread, experience, Beijing Opera, chopsticks, speech提示問(wèn)題: ? Why do you want to start the club?? What activities will you have in the club?【答案】Dear Mr. Lee,I’m writing to apply for starting a Chinese Culture Club. As we know, more and more people are interested in Chinese culture, so a Chinese Culture Club can be a good chance for our students to learn more. In this club, students will work together to plete different projects. As a result, we can understand each other better and develop friendships.We will have a variety of activities for students to experience Chinese culture, such as performing Beijing Opera, practising Chinese calligraphy, having papercutting petitions and so on. Moreover, we’ll hold some salons for students to share their life experiences in China and America. I believe everyone in the club will benefit a lot. I hope this application will be approved. Thank you for your consideration.Regards,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下中華文化。所提供的材料中列舉了你打算向?qū)W校申請(qǐng)建立一個(gè)社團(tuán)( Chinese Culture Club)。主要從建立該社團(tuán)的原因及社團(tuán)的主要活動(dòng)安排這幾個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。注意作文中必須包含材料和提示詞的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】In this club, students will work together to plete different projects. 在這個(gè)俱樂(lè)部，學(xué)生們將共同完成不同的項(xiàng)目。to plete different projects是動(dòng)詞不定式，做work together的目的。【高分句型二】I believe everyone in the club will benefit a lot. 我相信俱樂(lè)部里的每個(gè)人都會(huì)受益匪淺。句子everyone in the club will benefit a 。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)，有人選擇讀史書(shū)來(lái)了解歷史，你選擇哪種方法？理由是什么？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。方法理由看歷史劇情節(jié)有趣、通俗易懂；讀歷史書(shū)資料真實(shí)、引人深思；……（你的選擇）……（你的理由）要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Many historical plays have been on TV 【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹人們通過(guò)什么方式來(lái)了解歷史。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。8．書(shū)面表達(dá) 以下是你校?？痀OUTH中YOUR VOICE欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 remend two traditional Chinese things216。 show your reasons why you remend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事項(xiàng)：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個(gè)左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to share my opinion with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to remend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them. The second gift I want to remend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and fortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves? I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】【詳解】本文主要是向別人分享想法，推薦禮物。第一句話點(diǎn)題，隨后引出文章的兩個(gè)主題，一 remend t