【正文】 結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7．假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過(guò)程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。要求：—120 詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考要點(diǎn)：(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……)；。Dear Nick,How’s everything going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Nick,How’s everything going?Our school is holding an English reading festival this June. I’m very interested in it. There are many different activation in the festival such as reading good English books. sharing good stories and so on. It’s a good chance for us to learn more about western cultures. However, I have some problems. First, I don’t have enough books. For example, I want to get some books about western history. Next, I’m not so good at English, I have trouble in reading. Would you please share some good books with me and give me some advice on reading?I expect to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。假如你是李華，你校正舉辦英語(yǔ)讀書節(jié)活動(dòng),你在參與活動(dòng)的過(guò)程中遇到一些困難。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Nick寫一封向他求助。首先要注意書信的書寫格式，文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。在寫作時(shí)，要注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫；注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。參考要點(diǎn)：(時(shí)間、內(nèi)容……)。(如：缺少相關(guān)書籍、英語(yǔ)閱讀困難……)；。8．加入你是英國(guó)交流學(xué)生 Neil，你在南京 Sunshine Middle School 兩個(gè)月的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫一封感謝信。216。 what you39。ve learned about Chinese culture216。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what your homestay family do for you注意：1. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，感謝信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示，以 Neil的名義，用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫一封感謝信。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇演講稿。背 景；。學(xué)會(huì)感恩；；；。 參考詞匯：enter society 進(jìn)入社會(huì)， sense of thanks 感恩意識(shí)， behavior 行為要求：，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；、地名及能夠透露你個(gè)人身份的信息；：80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!【答案】書面表達(dá)參考范文（一）：Good morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks. I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.Thank you for your listening!書面表達(dá)參考范文（二）：Learn to express thanksGood morning, boys and girls!The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help. In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness. Thank you for your listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于感恩的演講稿。寫作中注意將材料按照材料提示進(jìn)行介紹，通過(guò)材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意使用連接詞，做到語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。由于是演講類作文，尤其注意應(yīng)用一些常見句式、短語(yǔ)來(lái)提高我們的表達(dá)水平。