【正文】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時注意郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。15．（北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，你打算邀請你們班交換生Peter參加下周日學校組織的志愿活動。請用英語寫一封邀請函，告訴他活動的時間和地點，活動內(nèi)容以及需要做什么準備。提示詞語： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes 提示問題：When and where will you go?What will you do in this activity?What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?Dear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li HuaDear Peter,How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity. I’m looking forward to your early reply.Li Hua【答案】Dear PeterHow is it going?I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.I’m looking forward to your early reply.YoursLi Hua【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，寫作要點為：1. 志愿者活動的時間和地點。2. 活動中做些什么。3. 建議彼得為這次活動做哪些準備。然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學校或家里曾經(jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面面俱到，可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，人稱為第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內(nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情，所以時態(tài)應該用一般過去時來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動名詞?！靖叻志湫投緼s we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運用，為文章增添了色彩。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。緊張的初中學習生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來一個輕松的暑假。請根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，談談你的假期計劃。提示：1. 好好休息，學會放松2. 讀書，因為讀書既有趣又能學到很多知識3. 陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務4. 參加社會活動，了解社會5. ……注意：～100；；，可適當發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：知識 knowledge, 社會活動 social activities_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I39。m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。首先認真審題和閱讀提示。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知此文時態(tài)應用一般將來時。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，列好提綱（ a good rest and learn to relax myself；2. read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make m