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really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。根據(jù)以下提示,以 Neil的名義,用英語給 Sunshine Middle School 校長寫一封感謝信。文章時態(tài)用一般過去時,人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細,考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點,并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時,注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,要層次清楚,要點分明,中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。【點睛】點睛:首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8.(B)按要求完成大作文(80詞左右)節(jié)約資源,保護環(huán)境,從我們身邊的小事做起。假設(shè)你是一個注重“低碳”生活的中學生,請以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文,簡單談談“綠色生活”的重要性,以及你所倡導的“綠色生活”方式。寫作要求:詞數(shù)80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù),不得透露姓名等個人信息?!敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活,環(huán)境保護,注意文章內(nèi)容?!驹斀狻渴紫赛c明如今的生活環(huán)境,越來越差,綠色生活勢在必行。其次點明綠色生活的重要性。然后說我在日常生活中對綠色出行作出的貢獻,騎自行車,出門關(guān)燈等。最后呼吁大家一起努力?!军c睛】首先正確理解作文題目,不要偏題,本文是關(guān)于綠色生活,它的重要性,以及你在日常生活中是如何踐行綠色生活的。其次,在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上,多運用連詞,使文章升華,長短句結(jié)合,使文章更上一檔次。9.書面表達校園安全問題越來越受到重視,為了確保學生的安全,學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。提示:1. 遵守校規(guī),按時到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學生的安全,學校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī),按時到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時告知家長和老師。這四個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱為第一人稱。本文是提建議,因此用shouldn’t或should來寫。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達具有條理性。【高分句型一】Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二,我們不應該和陌生人一起去,也不應該接受陌生人的東西。本句話是由and連接的并列句。【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認為這些規(guī)則對我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。