【正文】 你在博客里發(fā)的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩(shī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他回信：：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；: 80100詞左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文?！驹斀狻扛鶕?jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。英語(yǔ)作文一般分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：交代寫信目的——朋友Jack熱愛(ài)中國(guó)的唐詩(shī)宋詞。我將給你介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。7．書面表達(dá)，有人選擇讀史書來(lái)了解歷史，你選擇哪種方法？理由是什么？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。方法理由看歷史劇情節(jié)有趣、通俗易懂；讀歷史書資料真實(shí)、引人深思；……（你的選擇）……（你的理由）要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Many historical plays have been on TV 【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹人們通過(guò)什么方式來(lái)了解歷史。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。8．書面表達(dá)86. 如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大。上周我班學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓、放松進(jìn)行了討論。大家提出了許多種減壓、放松的方法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以How Can We get relaxed為題，寫一篇短文。詞匯：壓力pressure要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80~100個(gè)。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮How Can We Get RelaxedThese days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure. 【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to municate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，主要講述如何減壓放松。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，municate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+時(shí)間+（in）doing以及in this way，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．“友善”是一種美德，它猶如陽(yáng)光和雨露照耀并滋潤(rùn)著美德的形成。同學(xué)們，請(qǐng)奉獻(xiàn)你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會(huì)做出貢獻(xiàn)。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“友善待人、快樂(lè)生活”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。主要內(nèi)容包括:你對(duì)友善行為的認(rèn)識(shí)和理解，你平時(shí)做哪些友善的事情，以及你這樣做的美好愿望。提示詞語(yǔ):kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問(wèn)題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。s our duty to show kindness to others around us. _________________________________________________【答案】It’s our duty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our munity, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.I believe our society will bee better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勆钪心銓?duì)他人提供善意幫助的經(jīng)歷。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。