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。【高分句型二】I think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二,我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去,也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī),按時(shí)到校、離校;2. 不接受陌生人的物品;3. 結(jié)伴同行,天黑前到家;4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,以“School safety”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。其次,在語(yǔ)句正確的基礎(chǔ)上,多運(yùn)用連詞,使文章升華,長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,使文章更上一檔次。最后呼吁大家一起努力。其次點(diǎn)明綠色生活的重要性?!敬鸢浮縈y Green LifeAs the environment goes worse and worse, I think living a green life is really important for every one of us. Only when we live a green life can we have a better living environment. As for me, in my daily life, I often go to school by bike. It can not only help exercise myself, but also makes contribution to protecting the environment. Besides, I always turn off the lights whenever I am out to save energy. I hope everyone can live a green life.【解析】【分析】本文主題關(guān)于綠色生活,環(huán)境保護(hù),注意文章內(nèi)容。假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重“低碳”生活的中學(xué)生,請(qǐng)以“My Green Life”為題寫一篇短文,簡(jiǎn)單談?wù)劇熬G色生活”的重要性,以及你所倡導(dǎo)的“綠色生活”方式?!军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛:首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料,不可遺漏要點(diǎn),并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing, I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to express my thanks to you. During my twomonth stay in Nanjing. I enjoyed myself very much.I took the rich and colourful courses. I have learned Chinse Kungfu from a . is really amazing! I also know something about Chinese papercutting in Art I can’t speak have little difficult talking with the teachers and students here,theyare always ready to help me.I felt excited when I spent a weekend with a family. In their family,they taught me how to make also visited Confucins had a good time together. I feel really grateful for what you have done for us.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇書信作文。2. 詞數(shù) 80 左右,感謝信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 how the teachers and students help you216。 what you39。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,以 Neil的名義,用英語(yǔ)給 Sunshine Middle School 校長(zhǎng)寫一封感謝信。:注意書寫工整美觀整潔。合理使用連詞。:要點(diǎn)是否齊全,適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。注意檢查:?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。語(yǔ)言要規(guī)范,時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。最美好的祝福!你的,李明【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。當(dāng)你被邀請(qǐng)去他們家時(shí),你可以給你的同學(xué)帶一些小禮物。如果你的朋友有問(wèn)題,你應(yīng)該幫助他們。中國(guó)人很友好。你說(shuō)你在中國(guó)時(shí)會(huì)擔(dān)心如何與學(xué)生相處。有時(shí)我在戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)。讓我告訴你。歡迎來(lái)到中國(guó)。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無(wú)單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(