【正文】 invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。13．H解析：Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。14．A解析：The survey shows that many students have bee shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use puters for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。根據(jù)題干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作，人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱。內(nèi)容包括：學(xué)生近視原因：（not enough）、做作業(yè)、用電腦等（for a long time）防止近視的方法：，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)（eye exercises）（have the good habit of）個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：如：我認(rèn)為，我們應(yīng)該了解保護(hù)眼睛的重要性，盡最大努力保護(hù)我們的眼睛。（I think ???；try one39。s best to do sth.）。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。15．D解析：Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。s an useful product. I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同時(shí)For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的敘述很有條理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．A解析：According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don39。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。t spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and puters. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don39。t read in the sun。 don39。t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eyeexercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eyefriendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from being nearsighted.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下如何保護(hù)視力。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。主要從原因和建議兩個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎o it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。本題運(yùn)用句型：It is +形容詞+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當(dāng)你讀這本書的時(shí)候，你應(yīng)該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。when you read是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句。17．A解析：I39。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I ha