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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua題目②“我們都在努力奔跑, 我們都是追夢人。”有夢想就有目標, 有希冀才會奮斗。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“We Are All Dreamers”為主題的征文活動, 假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。談?wù)勀愕膲粝胧鞘裁矗磕銥槭裁磿羞@樣的夢想?為了實現(xiàn)你的夢想, 你打算怎么做?提示詞語:want to be, like, study hard, e true...提示問題:● What39。s your dream and why?● What will you do to make your dream e true?【答案】例文:Dear peter,How is it going?This Saturday is the Dragon Boat Festival. There will be a lot of interesting activities inLonghu Park. I’m writing to invite you to go there with me. We are going to meet at the south gate of Longhu Park at 9 o’clock. We can watch the dragon boat race. It’s very exciting. After that, we will learn how to make Zongzi. I think you will be interested in it. By the way, you can take a camera or your smart phone if you want to take some photos.I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,給Peter寫一封信,邀請他參加端午節(jié)游園活動,告訴我們見面的時間、地點以及要做的活動。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一、三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:This Saturday is……,There will be……,We are going to……,We can watch……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭表示我邀請你參加端午節(jié)游園活動,接下來介紹我們見面的時間和地點以及可以做的事,最后期望收到你的回復(fù)。此處invite sb to do sth, learn to do sth, be interested in, by the way, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9.三年快樂而充實的初中生活結(jié)束了,你將進入高中(中職)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來,你對高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。要求:(1)內(nèi)容要點:①生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳,圖書館,運動場……);②師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系;③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進步;④補充一點自己的想法。(2)文章不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱;要點齊全,語言通順,意思連貫,書寫規(guī)范,可以適當發(fā)揮。(3)提示詞:get along with;colorful(adj.);knowledge;habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: (118 words)I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言,列出簡單提綱,確定句子的時態(tài),關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚,并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài),注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系。