【正文】 當發(fā)揮。My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It39。s closing time. I still don39。t want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，可以適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時態(tài)一般應該用一般現在時。為了是表達更有邏輯性，可以使用序數詞，連接詞等?！军c睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in 。8．隨著網絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化?！熬W購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網購群體中。請你根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇網上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(advantage)；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(disadvantage)， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費你的觀點……提示詞匯：網購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導致 cause注意：，可適當發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當的素材也是使短文中心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當的連詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。9．三年快樂而充實的初中生活結束了，你將進入高中(中職)學校學習。展望未來，你對高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。要求：（1）內容要點：①生活、學習環(huán)境(餐廳，圖書館，運動場……)；②師生、同學關系；③生活多彩、學業(yè)進步；④補充一點自己的想法。（2）文章不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱；要點齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，可以適當發(fā)揮。（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: （118 words）I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動筆前應根據材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)和將來時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。