【正文】 當(dāng)發(fā)揮。My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in succession. It39。s closing time. I still don39。t want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語可以用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型：The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. ；Tourists in the Palace Museum are like knitting. People take pictures in 。8．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變， 購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。“網(wǎng)購”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)， 看不到商品本身， 造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping online。 商品 goods。 導(dǎo)致 cause注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；；：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. 【答案】With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has bee fashionable. Some of us students also join the group. Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods that aren’t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，in good quality，figure out，have the chance to do，be attacked by，of course，take care of等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．三年快樂而充實(shí)的初中生活結(jié)束了，你將進(jìn)入高中(中職)學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來，你對高中(中職)生活充滿期待。請以“I Expect My School Life”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：①生活、學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境(餐廳，圖書館，運(yùn)動(dòng)場……)；②師生、同學(xué)關(guān)系；③生活多彩、學(xué)業(yè)進(jìn)步；④補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)自己的想法。（2）文章不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；要點(diǎn)齊全，語言通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）提示詞：get along with；colorful(adj.)；knowledge；habitI Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. ____________________________【答案】One possible version: （118 words）I Expect My School LifeI will study in a high school soon. Everything is new to me. I hope my school is big and clean with a large dinning room. And the library is full of different kinds of books. So I can read them in my spare time. I can get along well with my teachers and classmates. I can help each other with my classmates. At the same time, I expect my school life is colorful, after class I can listen to music, play chess and basketball. To get more useful knowledge or information, I can surf the Internet. I will keep a good eating habit. Do exercise often to stay in good spirits. Try my best to make great progress.As long as I stick to it, I can achieve my dream.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。寫作中注意將以前的自己和現(xiàn)在的自己介紹清楚，并介紹一下自己的愿望。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致等問題。寫作中注意使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。