【正文】 Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,39。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對(duì)著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。8．題目①假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英國(guó)友好校下周將要來(lái)訪(fǎng)。學(xué)校國(guó)際部正在招募接待英國(guó)學(xué)生的志愿者，陪伴他們度過(guò)周末。你想成為志愿者。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，在信中說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由，以及你打算拿給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng)。提示詞語(yǔ)：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問(wèn)題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，以書(shū)信格式，根據(jù)所給材料寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)材料要用全，注意緊扣主題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?！驹斀狻?，以第一人稱(chēng)向?qū)W校國(guó)際部申請(qǐng)當(dāng)志愿者；根據(jù)材料提示，介紹自己的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，計(jì)劃如何安排周末活動(dòng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。，第一層闡述自己申請(qǐng)的理由，介紹自己開(kāi)朗的性格適合志愿者的工作；第二層詳細(xì)介紹給英國(guó)學(xué)生安排哪些周末活動(dòng)；最后表明自己的期待。文體正確，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students闡述自己的愿望，make friends、It39。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作；用動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)have some plans for、 介詞短語(yǔ)like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語(yǔ)從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ，短語(yǔ)豐富，句型多樣。9．今年初《流浪地球》在中國(guó)火熱上映。影片故事設(shè)定在2075年，講述太陽(yáng)即將毀火，已經(jīng)不適合人類(lèi)生存，而面對(duì)絕境，人類(lèi)將開(kāi)啟“流浪地球”計(jì)劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽(yáng)系，尋找人類(lèi)新家園的故事。影片多次提到“希望”。比如，老師問(wèn):希望是什么?班長(zhǎng)回答:希望是我們這個(gè)年代鉆石一樣的東西。你的筆友Demon觀(guān)看后，印象深刻，給你寫(xiě)了一封郵件。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容結(jié)合你的情況，用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。To: LiHua@China. From: Demon@ America. Subject:Problems and hopeDear Li Hua, How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called Wandering Earth. I am deeply moved by those Chinese people who never give up. You Chinese are really brave and full of wisdom. As my Chinese pen pal, what will you do when you meet difficulty? Would you please tell me the following things?What problems do you often meet in your school life?How do you usually solve your problems?Who has influenced you most in your life and what do you think of him/her?What do you think about hope? Please write back and tell me everything.Best wishes,Demon注意：，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear DemonI39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【答案】Dear Demon，I39。m glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well. In school, I also encounter some problems, the biggest problem is how to strike a balance between study and life. Whenever I want to play and don39。t want to study, I will think of the Chinese people who never give up in the film wandering Earth, who will inspire me to study hard.In life, my English teacher has the greatest influence on me. Whenever I have a great need, my English teacher always es to help me. She is the person who helps me the most in my junior high school life at the beginning of three years. . I like her very much and thank her even more.I think hope is the driving force of all, as long as there is hope, there will be motivation, it is possible to succeed. What do you think?Please write to me and tell me your view.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文。根據(jù)所給出的材料內(nèi)容可知文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先要注意書(shū)信的書(shū)寫(xiě)格式，要對(duì)來(lái)信中的問(wèn)題作出全面的答復(fù)。同時(shí)在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順，詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤，不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。