【正文】 e senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close munication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It39。s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty. How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Li Ming【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，告訴艾米目前你在全力以赴為中考而學(xué)習(xí)，并與她交流一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如get good results, spend+時間+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。4．寫作: 81. 目前，很多高中都開設(shè)了特色課程，涵蓋烘焙、舞蹈、鋼琴、跆拳道、足球等內(nèi)容，很大程度上增加了校園生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。 作為即將升入高中的你，對于特色文化課程有何看法？請根據(jù)下表的提示完成一篇短文并闡述你的觀點。Views on Special Courses贊同1. 有助于增加我們的技能；2. 有利于培養(yǎng)我們不輕易放棄的精神；3. ……不贊同1. 過多占用學(xué)生時間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)；2. 需要投入更多的錢，增加家庭壓力；3. ……你的觀點1. ……2. ……要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2. 必須包括表格中所有相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入）4. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us develop our life abilities. What’s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldn’t give up easily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can’t reach an agreement. Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don’t have so many teachers on these courses. We can’t get more knowledge without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it’s good to have special courses. It’s not only impove our abilities but also give us much fun.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如carry on，first of all，like to do，play a game，this kind of，What’s more，give up，with the help of，so much time，pay attention to，on the paper，put up等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Moreover, we need to pay much money for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It’s not only improve our abilities but also give us much students think it takes so much time to have these lessons that they can’t pay attention to their grades. / I think it’s good to have special ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 請你以“Learn to Smile”為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。學(xué)會對自己微笑面對困難與煩惱學(xué)會微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）。使你自信，擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。有益于身心健康。學(xué)會對他人微笑便于與他人之間的交流。給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。參考詞匯： 對某人微笑 smile at sb. 誤解 misunderstand短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。 Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile ._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileI remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy. Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you municate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well. In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.【解析】這是一篇表格式的作文，要點是一表格的形式出現(xiàn)，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達(dá)的要點，然后加以整合，也可以適當(dāng)增加使意思更連貫，但要點一定要全，不能漏掉。寫作時要注意遣詞造句，不能受漢語的影響，要用地道的英語表達(dá)，注意時態(tài)，語態(tài)，單詞拼寫，語法等問題，用好簡單句，適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句?？梢杂靡恍└呒壴~匯。還要注意句子的關(guān)聯(lián)。6．（2017年浙江紹興）書面表達(dá)?！癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點。同學(xué)主要觀點