【正文】 t’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個溫情的中國家庭。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．請根據(jù)表格內Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語言要通順，表達要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個英語單詞。文章開頭結尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱進行敘述，寫作中主語時態(tài)及主謂一致等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當使用連接詞?！玖咙c說明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學習中，我們應注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點：考查提綱類作文10．書面表達 我校決定讓學生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學生的一種方式。 這件事在學生中引 起了強烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報告給學校。 同意 ：1．多數(shù)學生是獨生子女，不會做事。 2．學生應該學會做艱苦的工作。 3．學會理解和尊重清潔工人的勞動。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學生生病。 2．不是學生應該做的事情。 3．打掃教室就足夠了。 注意：1．短文應包括表中所有內容，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯； 2．不少于80詞。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點詞匯及短語：argument爭論；take place發(fā)生；among（三者或三者以上）之間；a good chance for sb對某人來說是個好機會；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點句型：（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自從我們學校讓學生做自愿勞動以來，在學生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論?，F(xiàn)在完成時（have/has+done）。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。動詞不定式作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，疑問詞+to do。