【正文】 les in my family. My parents want me to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play puter games in my free time. I can’t go out on school nights. I must go to bed by 10 pm. I think my parents are too strict with me. Sometimes I feel bored, but I understand they really love me. I decided to municate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I should often help them do housework because they are busy with their work, too. I’m sure if we trust each other, we will get on well with our parents.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，針對(duì)父母對(duì)你要求過(guò)多你感到厭煩這一問(wèn)題，你是如何解決的。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如want sb to do, be allowed to do, in my free time, be strict with, decide to do, municate with, as much as possible, share...with..., help sb do, be busy with以及get on well with。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在本周班會(huì)課上，同學(xué)們對(duì)“初中生什么時(shí)候放學(xué)比較合適？”這一問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué)，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a parttime job...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化；同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（四川中考模擬）書面表達(dá)越來(lái)越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會(huì)帶來(lái)極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80字左右）內(nèi)容包含：,如走人行道/過(guò)斑馬線。，讓短文通順，過(guò)渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實(shí)際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，并補(bǔ)充個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采。可能用到的詞組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。17．（北京中考模擬）自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ)：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問(wèn)題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do.