【正文】 they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ挥⒄Z作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的；make great progress 取得巨大進步14．（四川中考模擬）書面表達越來越多汽車進入我們的家庭生活,改善了我們的生活,但同時也帶來了很多問題,如塞車和車禍,給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢?請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文（80字左右）內(nèi)容包含：,如走人行道/過斑馬線。，讓短文通順，過渡自然。參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebracrossing 斑馬線________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars ing into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.Traffic safety is everybody39。s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.We can say cars are ing into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.【解析】本文屬于給出一個主題，對這個主題的相關(guān)內(nèi)容進行論述，談?wù)撚嘘P(guān)交通安全的相關(guān)內(nèi)容。實際上就是要求書寫一份倡議書。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，并補充個人的觀點。注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫，豐富文章的文采?？赡苡玫降脑~組：more and more, heavy traffic, obey the rules, look right and left, tell sb. not to do sth., walk on sidewalks等等。15．（湖北中考模擬）為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽?，F(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇參賽短文。提示：1. 保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；2. 待人有禮，樂于助人；3. 遵守交通規(guī)則；4. 寫出1到2條自己的觀點。要求：1. 文章必須包括所給提示中1—3項內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當發(fā)揮；2. 內(nèi)容連貫，表達通順。3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞。How to Behave Well_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.Our city should be kept clean every day, so it’s bad manners to litter everywhere. And we should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. It’s also important for us to follow traffic rules. We can only go across the road ,when the traffic lights are green. What’s more, we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.Let’s action now. I believe, the better we behave, the more civilized our city will be.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是為配合我市開展“創(chuàng)建文明城市（build a civilized city）”活動，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語征文比賽。根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇演講稿，講我們應(yīng)該如何做才是文明舉止，因此人稱用第一人稱we來寫，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，重點句型及短語：in order to為了，try one39。s best to do ，be friendly to ，be ready to do ，It’s +adj.（ for sb.） + to do 。had better not do ，也可用到should等情態(tài)動詞或祈使句。16．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達假設(shè)格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教師，在他回國前夕，學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會。請用英文寫一篇歡送辭，內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人，三年前來到我校教英語；2. 他與我們相處融洽，但對我們要求嚴格；3. 這些年來，…… 我們深表感激；4. 下星期他將離?；貒Ｋ宦讽橈L(fēng)。【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。17．（河南中考模擬）書面表達每個人都有自己心愛的物品，相信你也擁有一個自己心愛的物品吧！請以“A（n） _____ I have”為題，描述一個或一件你心愛的物品，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿?，以及它存在的意義。要求：1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played