【正文】 taught me how to play a kind of puter think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。7．假如你是李華，下周你們學(xué)校將要組織學(xué)生開展“父親節(jié)活動(dòng)計(jì)劃”分享活動(dòng)，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。請(qǐng)用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計(jì)劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時(shí)要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達(dá)你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計(jì)劃；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，描述具體建議時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。8．畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長寫封信，簡要匯報(bào)三年來初中生活的收獲與存在的問題。假如你是Jim,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示，用英文做一個(gè)簡短的匯報(bào)。收獲1. 學(xué)到很多知識(shí)…2. 學(xué)會(huì)了與人相處：在校...,在家…3. 遇到困難時(shí)…存在問題學(xué)習(xí)壓力…目前想法1. 感謝 2…要求：（1）：表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）：必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）：不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。（4）：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jim【答案】例文Dear Dad ＆ Mum ,I’ll leave junior school soon and meet a new challenge of my life. Now I would like to tell you what I have done in the past three years.I have learnt a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I have learnt about a lot of famous people all over the world. Tan dun is a great musician. He said his music is to dream without boundaries. I can also get along with my teachers and help each other too. At home I can do some housework so that you can have more time to rest. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.However, I feel stressed in my study. I have a lot of homework to do everyday .As a result, I have no time for my hobbies.I would thank you for taking good care of me and thank my teachers and friends for their help. I will plan my time well to study better and sleep well.Yours sincerelyJim【解析】【詳解】這是一篇書信作文。在畢業(yè)之際，學(xué)校要求每位九年級(jí)學(xué)生給各自家長寫封信，簡要匯報(bào)三年來初中生活的收獲與存在的問題。假如你是Jim，要求根據(jù)表格的提示內(nèi)容，用英文做一個(gè)簡短的匯報(bào)。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作過程中，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。9．書面表達(dá)近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動(dòng)，如春游、夏令營、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明，請(qǐng)給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 安全第一，但開展一些戶外活動(dòng)還是有必要的；2. 通過這些活動(dòng)，學(xué)生不僅能增長知識(shí)，還能開拓視野；3. 與大自然親密接觸，能增強(qiáng)同學(xué)們的環(huán)保意識(shí)；4. 建議學(xué)校在活動(dòng)之前教給學(xué)生一些安全常識(shí)，讓學(xué)生學(xué)會(huì)保護(hù)自己和自救。參考詞匯：outdoor activities戶外活動(dòng)；open up one’s eyes開闊視野注意：1. 詞數(shù)80—100；2. 請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；4. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High School. I’m writing to you about outdoor activities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Zhang Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Zheng,I’m sorry to trouble you. I’m Zhang Ming, a student from Yuying High school. V m writing to you about outdoor activities.Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us, dear headmaster? Of course, safety es first. But it’s necessary for us to take part in such activities.In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way. What’s more, it’s a good way for us to learn to protect the environment by staying close to the nature. And we can get on well with our teachers and classmates.Why not show us some safety knowledge before these activities. It’s a good chance for us to learn to protect and save ourselves.Best wishes!Yours,Zhang Ming【解析】【詳解】近年來，人們非常關(guān)注學(xué)生的安全。很多學(xué)校為此取消了許多有意義的外出活動(dòng)，如春游、夏令營、野餐等。假設(shè)你是育英中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生張明，請(qǐng)給鄭校長發(fā)一封電子郵件，就此發(fā)表自己的看法。這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己的度假計(jì)劃本文做給材料比較詳細(xì)，敘述中注意將要點(diǎn)中的事情介紹清楚，可以適當(dāng)取舍。動(dòng)筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時(shí)態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文時(shí)態(tài)問題比較復(fù)雜，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題，人稱主要是第一人稱。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達(dá)的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。【點(diǎn)睛】文中用到了一些好的句型，這些句型給文中增色不少，如：Could you please organize some outdoor activities for us；In my opinion, we can learn more knowledge and open up our eyes in this way.