【正文】 h the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．However，if we have too heavy stress，we can39。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．In my opinion，to deal with stress，we39。d better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we39。ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams． 【解析】試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)以“How to deal with the exam stress”為題寫(xiě)一篇作文。在題目中給出了一張表格，需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將表格中的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。分析表格可以看到，這篇作文的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)方面，第一個(gè)是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們是有好處的；第二個(gè)是過(guò)多的壓力對(duì)我們有害；最后發(fā)表自己的看法，如何來(lái)應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。因此這篇作文可以分為三段來(lái)寫(xiě)，這樣可以使整個(gè)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有層次。在每一段中加上具體的內(nèi)容，使段落更加充實(shí)。最后還要補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。全文需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意多使用一些好的句式、短語(yǔ)，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目要求把表格中的內(nèi)容完整的表達(dá)出來(lái)，并加上了自己的看法。作者將整篇短文分成了三個(gè)部分，首先寫(xiě)的是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們有利。這里作者主要使用的句型或短語(yǔ)有besides，還用到了一些復(fù)合句，如條件狀語(yǔ)從句等；接下來(lái)作者寫(xiě)的是過(guò)多的壓力的害處，段首先用however來(lái)進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折，然后使用了一個(gè)復(fù)合句ifwehavetooheavystress,wecan’tsleepwellatnightandwemayfeel too，但是意思很完整；最后作者發(fā)表了自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)，用了短語(yǔ)inmyopinion，還用到了提建議時(shí)經(jīng)常用的hadbetter和should。整篇作文意思連貫，語(yǔ)言流暢，層次分明。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來(lái)一個(gè)輕松的暑假。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕募倨谟?jì)劃。提示：1. 好好休息，學(xué)會(huì)放松2. 讀書(shū)，因?yàn)樽x書(shū)既有趣又能學(xué)到很多知識(shí)3. 陪父母聊天，幫他們做家務(wù)4. 參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)，了解社會(huì)5. ……注意：～100；；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：知識(shí) knowledge, 社會(huì)活動(dòng) social activities_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I39。m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall. I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文。首先認(rèn)真審題和閱讀提示。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知此文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，列好提綱（ a good rest and learn to relax myself；2. read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge；3. spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework；4. take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society；5. If possible, I39。d like to go to Beijing for a visit of the Great Wall.；6. I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.），不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。點(diǎn)睛：（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）根據(jù)內(nèi)容確定短文時(shí)態(tài)，學(xué)生要運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)，及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。 （4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)序，主謂一致等。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書(shū)日，這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū)，促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題，向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書(shū)的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí)，開(kāi)闊視野 2. 使人愉悅，益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……（自由發(fā)揮）現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多，無(wú)良好讀書(shū)習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書(shū)，不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading．Moreover，some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet． In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a term．Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library．We must spend more time reading some useful books．As a result，we can have a better future． Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so much，spend too much time doing，search the I