【正文】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請(qǐng)你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。10．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封保護(hù)大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動(dòng)物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因?yàn)椋?）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應(yīng)如何保護(hù)它們（不少于三條）。要求：1）恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動(dòng)物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。文章共分為三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說(shuō)明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護(hù)的大象我們應(yīng)該如何去做。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時(shí)注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。本篇文章內(nèi)容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。