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型:被動(dòng)句型。9.書面表達(dá)初中就要畢業(yè)了,校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點(diǎn) 寫一封信,說說你的計(jì)劃?;顒?dòng)畢業(yè)晚會(huì)時(shí)間6月28日晚上七點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)學(xué)校禮堂school hall參與者全體初三學(xué)生和老師活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.邀請校長作演講;2.互贈(zèng)禮物送祝福;3.各班表演精彩節(jié)目4. 要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使句子通順,連貫。 ,語法正確,書寫整潔。 ,開頭結(jié)尾己給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I39。m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】這篇書面表達(dá)主要是推薦自己的畢業(yè)晚會(huì)計(jì)劃?!驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文,介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動(dòng)計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。10.書面表達(dá)為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以MyMother為主題的征文活動(dòng),請根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖所提供的信息,寫一篇短文,介紹你的母親和你之間的故事。參考詞匯:givemuchto…,It39。smyturnto…,trymybestto…提示:1)短文內(nèi)容須包括所給內(nèi)容,含母親曾為你所做的事和你將為母親所做的事各一件,并闡述原因;2)請注意短文結(jié)構(gòu)層次、時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用和卷面整潔度;3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4)文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove.Wealsoneedtoshowlove.ThepersonIlovemostismymother.___.【答案】My motherWe need love.We also need toshow love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),要求以MyMother為主題寫一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫作時(shí),注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。