【正文】 后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9．同學們，初中生活即將結束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來！請你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計劃，可以結合自己的實際發(fā)揮。 寫作內容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。，幫家長做家務。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計入規(guī)定字數(shù)。；要點齊全；句子及篇章結構正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內容為計劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點?？键c：考查提綱作文。10．書面表達假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。俱樂部的同學們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給Angel寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。寫作要點：1表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情。2介紹活動的情況：（l）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（2）本周五的下午3點，大家將共同交流讀書的體會。（3）同學們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。3說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。寫作要求：1不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實，行文連貫。3字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4至少80詞。Dear Angel,How are you doing? Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy。Last Friday，we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn’t go from one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to, be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand...on the other hand, from to以及we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room中which引導非限制性定語從句。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。