【正文】 xpectation . Second, there is endless homework and tests every , Second點(diǎn)出。第二自然段提到釋放壓力的方法，應(yīng)用In order to表目的。用What’s more表遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)。并用祈使句So never give in to the difficulties and stress easily點(diǎn)題呼吁。整篇文章層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。8．為配合學(xué)校“誠信教育”活動，學(xué)校英語報開展了以“Try to be honest”為主題的征文活動。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇征文稿。（1）列舉你班同學(xué)存在的不誠實現(xiàn)象：抄作業(yè)，考試作弊，說謊話......。（2）簡述誠實的重要性，并用你的一次具體經(jīng)歷加以說明。注意：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和學(xué)校名稱。（2）詞數(shù)100左右。（3）短文首句僅供參考，不計入總數(shù)。參考詞匯：作弊cheat（v.）說謊tell a lieTry to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Try to be honestTo be honest is one of the most treasured traditional values in China. The children are taught to be honest when they are very young. At schools the students are also instructed to be honest.However, with the development of society, we often hear plaints about dishonesty. Reports with the theme of dishonesty often appear in the media. For example, some people try to get rich and live a fortable life. But they do not work hard honestly, instead they cheat others. They sell something quite ordinary at a very high price. Some people’s delaying paying back the loan can serve as another example. Some people, including some college students, get loan from the bank, and promise to pay within, say, 3 years. However, they don’t do that.The dishonest people sometimes can get benefit from their behaviors. So some people assert that dishonesty can bring people benefit, while honesty only makes people suffer. Is that so? Definitely not. It is always true that honesty is the best policy. It pays to be honest. The cheater selling the treasure mentioned above will surely be disclosed and punished some day. On the contrary, if he had been honest, neither the buyer nor he himself would have suffered. The people who do not return money in time will sooner or later bee infamous, and will not get the money from others again. If he had acted differently, he would have earned respect and trust, meanwhile, the bank would not have suffered from loss.【解析】這是一篇誠信征文，英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。9．假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Johnson打算暑假來合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫作時，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫完后記得對文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫及語法錯誤。本篇文章首先第一段對別人的到來表示歡迎，接著對合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語及句型使用正確，很不錯的一篇文章。