【正文】 談自己的好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),要根據(jù)提出的幾個(gè)問(wèn)題為中心圍繞展開(kāi)，再進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)难由臁?. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章采用三段式，以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言層次感很強(qiáng)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。3. 高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：get ready for；take notes；on time；daily life；important points。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。7．書(shū)面表達(dá)。職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃（career planning）一詞源于1908年的美國(guó)，指的是對(duì)職業(yè)生涯乃至人生進(jìn)行持續(xù)的系統(tǒng)的計(jì)劃的過(guò)程。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時(shí)候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。請(qǐng)以此為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文。寫(xiě)作要求:：80—120詞；。參考要點(diǎn)：1. 職業(yè)選擇及原因；2. 現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備(學(xué)習(xí)、興趣發(fā)展等)；3. ……My Career Planning_____________________________________________________________________________【答案】My Career PlanningEverybody has his or her dream and career. Different person has different ideas in choosing their career. For me, my ideal career is to be a teacher.When I was still a little child in the primary school, I found it was so great to be a teacher. In my heart I think the teachers can teach students a variety of knowledge. What39。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Everybody has……，my ideal career is……，When I was……，So I must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我的理想職業(yè)是當(dāng)一名教師，接下來(lái)介紹我選擇當(dāng)老師的原因以及我現(xiàn)階段的準(zhǔn)備，最后表示只要我有機(jī)會(huì)，我將會(huì)選擇做一名老師。此處a variety of, what’s more, both…and…，get on well with, choose to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。8．你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求： 1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Kindness is a giftDear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life? That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【答案】例文Dear classmates,I think kindness is a special gift to everyone. How can we show it to others in our daily life?When we’re at home, it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other. We should also be kind enough to our neighbours in our neighborhood. While they’re away from home, we can keep an eye on their houses. At school, tell our classmates to ask for help whenever they need. If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the lesson. On the bus, we should take care of the elderly by giving them our seats. And once there is someone who tries to fight with the bus driver, it’s better for us to stop him.I hope everyone can be kind to others so that we can live in a world full of love.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindness is a gift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后再組合成文。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，為了使短文更顯得有邏輯性，在列舉自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，可以適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞。舉出的例子要有說(shuō)服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫(xiě)完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的文章，作者用到了一些好的句型：it’s important to show our respect to our parents. Helping them do some housework will make us close to each other.；If one of them is absent from school, we can help them with the 。9．假設(shè)某英文報(bào)“我愛(ài)寫(xiě)作”欄目為了配合創(chuàng)建“學(xué)習(xí)型城市”，正在舉辦專題英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，以“Lifelong Learning”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，參加比賽。終身學(xué)習(xí)的意義1．人們上學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)、參加考試，但學(xué)習(xí)不只在學(xué)校；2．學(xué)校畢業(yè)，不是學(xué)習(xí)的終止。終身學(xué)習(xí)的途徑去博物館、閱讀書(shū)籍、體育鍛煉、外出旅行終身學(xué)習(xí)的益處考生自擬(至少一點(diǎn))注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順； 3．短文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Lifelong LearningWhen you finish high school or university，is learning done? The answer is“no．”In many countries，people continue learning all their lives．【答案】When you finish high school or university，is learning done? The answer is“no．”many countries，people continue learning all their lives．Why is lifelong learning important? You go to school and learn．You study．Y take tests．But learning doesn’t only happen in school．And learning doesn’t stop wh you finish high school or university．You are learning all the time．For example，learni can happen when you go to a museum．It can also happen when you read a book．Y learn when you play a sport or when you take a trip．Learning is life! We never st learning．Every day，you can improve yourself by learning something new【解析】試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文