【正文】 ause good environment is more important than anything else.。書面表達題要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和高分句式，語言要規(guī)范，信息表達清晰、完整，意思連貫。要學以致用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。7．假如你是李華，下周你們學校將要組織學生開展“父親節(jié)活動計劃”分享活動，你打算先分享給你們班交換生Peter，希望聽聽他的看法。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。提示詞語： gift, love, opinion提示問題： ● What’s your plan for Father’s Day? ● Why do you do so? ● What do you want Peter to do?Dear Peter,How is it going? We will share the plan for Father’s Day next Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Peter,How is it going?We will share the plan for Father’s Day next week. I am going to do some meaningful things for my father. Firstly, I am going to buy a beautiful card for him. And then, I plan to cook him a big meal. Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help.I will do this because I love my father deeply. He works very hard every day to support my family. Would you please give me some advice? I am eager to receive your early reply. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按郵件格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；第二段寫你為什么這么做；第三段表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述父親節(jié)計劃；時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，描述具體建議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。句型：Though I am not good at cooking, I can ask my mother for help；I am eager to receive your early reply。8． 人類只有一個地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示: ；，損害健康；，亂排廢水；，使我們的家園更加美麗。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動筆前首先要認真審題,弄清題意。然后根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！玖咙c說明】這篇短文包含了所有要點，能圍繞內(nèi)容要點適當發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容具體、豐富。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，具有較強的語言運用能力。層次清晰，語言地道，主題鮮明，內(nèi)容翔實，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用了一些比較好的字句。比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。考點：考查提綱類作文9．(B) 《朗讀者》第五期節(jié)目中，主持人在開場白中說道：“我們的一生，會經(jīng)歷很多的第一次，難忘而又寶貴，它意味著我們的成長。”請談?wù)勀闳松凶铍y忘的“第一次”，或許是第一次做家務(wù)、第一次旅行、第一次成功……并說說你從中學到了什么或有哪些收獲。不少于80詞。（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名）【答案】The First CookingLast weekend, my parents went out and only I stayed at home. So I had to cook a meal for myself. First I washed the cabbages and then cooked it. But I didn39。t know how to cook them I put too much salt into the cabbages. So they tasted too salty. I had to throw them away. But I didn39。t lose my heart. This weekend, I asked my mother to teach me how to cook. She taught me how much salt I should use. Wow, the cabbages tasted good. My mother praised me and I felt very happy. Now I know that if I try hard, I will succeed.【解析】【分析】本文為材料作文，需要寫出第一次做某事，人生中有許多第一次，可以挑選一件讓自己感覺深刻，并且從中學到了許多東西的事件來寫，這樣的話，貼近生活實際，學生有話可說?！驹斀狻勘疚膶懥宋业牡谝淮巫鲲?，先交代背景知識，因為父母不在家，所以我不得不自己動手，動手做的過程中，由于沒有經(jīng)驗，理所當然地失敗了。但是，我不能氣餒，要從失敗中找原因，從哪里跌倒，就從哪里起來，所以，第二周，我讓媽媽教我做菜，獲得了成功，而且知道了，只要不放棄，就能獲得成功?！军c睛】本篇作文貼近實際，每個人都有第一次，挑選一件自己有話可說的來寫即可。但是需要注意文章邏輯，語篇順序，注意連接詞的使用和長短句結(jié)合。這樣的話，文章符合英文造句習慣，更容易獲得高分。