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I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is ing. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it39。s expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。8.書面表達(dá)初中生活即將結(jié)束。在這三年里你的生活中定不乏難以忘懷的人或事,請以“An unforgettable in my school life”為題,用英語寫一篇短文。講述一個(gè)你最難忘的人或事。要求: ,如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。【答案】An unforgettable teacher in my school lifeFor these three years, I regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers. She not only helps me with my English but also cares for me in life. When I first learned English ,I dared not talk in her class because of my pronunciation. She taught me how to pronounce the words correctly again and again with patience. After class , she gave me lots of advice on how to learn English well. Now I can speak English as well as my classmates. She looks after me like my mother while I am busy studying. We have fun doing sports together .She is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school life.【解析】【分析】本篇是話題作文,介紹自己難忘的人或事?!驹斀狻浚_定寫作的目標(biāo),寫自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事,描述難忘的人用第三人稱,講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時(shí),開頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述,用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);書寫時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”,敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié),文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了,注意短語、句型的正確使用。,開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題,正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己, is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),緊扣主題,前呼后應(yīng)。:巧用連詞, not only…but also,because of as well as,so…that…句子得以有機(jī)結(jié)合;短語how to do sth,teach sb to do sth,care for也為文章的語言增色不少。9.書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)社組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語”征文活動(dòng),你有意參加。請從下面兩句諺語中任選一句作為標(biāo)題寫一篇英語作文,內(nèi)容須包括:1. 該諺語的含義;2. 體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。a) A friend in need is a friend indeed.b) Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯:諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。二選一,第一個(gè)是“患難見真情”,第二個(gè)是“有志者事競成”?!驹斀狻繕?biāo)題都是以諺語的形式出現(xiàn),所以考生第一步做的是理解這兩個(gè)言語的意思,選擇自己較有把握的。在選擇標(biāo)題之后,根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容提示,進(jìn)行寫作。寫作時(shí),先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,這樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體