【正文】 e part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語語法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。9．上周，你們班就初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論?，F(xiàn)在，請你根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意：；，書寫工整、規(guī)范；。生詞提示：electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由；。，騎電動車不安全；，騎電動車也快不起來?！敬鸢浮縇ast week， our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it， because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles， for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析：本題要求以初中生能否騎電動自行車上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80100詞左右的英語短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)書寫。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，書寫時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明，談及理由按照要求至少要各寫兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，書寫工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分?？键c(diǎn)：提綱類作文。10．中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。你的煩惱你的做法個(gè)頭不高，相貌平常不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少學(xué)會溝通，友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，課外活動少……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點(diǎn)）要求：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。要求從個(gè)人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文開頭直奔主題：我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?；后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?，生動具體，條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語、作賓語用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)；and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。