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【正文】 式in order to；try my best to；狀語(yǔ)從句so…that …；比較級(jí)do much better in …、feel more confident等；短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。 ”9．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)Zhang Ying的一些表現(xiàn)的提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，把她介紹給你的外國(guó)朋友Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel（爭(zhēng)吵） with herclassmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or play putergames for more than an hour要求：語(yǔ)言要通順，表達(dá)要正確。文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)英語(yǔ)單詞。文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible versionDear Mary,I’m very glad to introduce（介紹） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14yearold girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays puter games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。寫作中注意將張穎的情況介紹清楚。根據(jù)材料可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱進(jìn)行敘述，寫作中主語(yǔ)時(shí)態(tài)及主謂一致等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在寫作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高興做某事；a lot of許多；get up起床等。本文中時(shí)間詞如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起來(lái)邏輯清楚，條理分明。在學(xué)習(xí)中，我們應(yīng)注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文10．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)！請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計(jì)劃，可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際發(fā)揮。 寫作內(nèi)容：，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。，幫家長(zhǎng)做家務(wù)。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開頭部分已給出，但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。；要點(diǎn)齊全；句子及篇章結(jié)構(gòu)正確、連貫；書寫規(guī)范。My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. 【答案】My junior high school years are ing to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous , I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I39。m sure I39。ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】試題分析：短文要制定出度假計(jì)劃，文章需要用第一人稱“I”進(jìn)行書寫，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人稱。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫，主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。所寫的句子要符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。用了一些銜接詞besides等，句子過(guò)度自然。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。
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