英語高考考前寫作強化(ppt35)-考試學習-資料下載頁
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【導讀】1審題要準；定位要清。2緊扣主題；首位呼應。3內(nèi)容充實；詳略得當。4合情合理；邏輯清晰。5語言簡潔；交際得體。事實，理由，觀點等來進行解釋，序的示意詞來突出每個實例。文章層次清楚，重點突出。比較通常是指對人或事物之間的相。對比通常是側(cè)重分析兩者之間的不同。多，可逐點分析。手機擁有量變化的報導。人們生活所帶來的利與弊。概括說明中美大學生的主要收入。分析產(chǎn)生這種不同現(xiàn)象的可能原。確定主題；理清結(jié)構。信息歸類；支撐論點。首位呼應；緊扣扣題。
【正文】 e air is getting dirtier and dirtier. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is being more and more serious. 修改前： As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on . 修改后： As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on. 4 過于簡單的句子使文章缺少邏輯 性，可讀性。 修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a twowheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. 修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car— Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a twowheel bicycle on the sidewalk. 修改前 Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn’t stop and hit the old man. The driver didn’t stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman. 修改后 Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didn’t stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman.
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